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Critique my holiday site

by fahax
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  • WEB DESIGN
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Hy warriors
I make site for holidays its almost complete just need few amandements, how you can see this site
toyzjungle.com
Please suggest off page seo and how to maximize revenue during holidays
Thanks
#critique #holiday #site
  • Profile picture of the author Nico Puegher
    The site is broke, maybe you did it? not sure but here is how I see it:



    First you need to fix this, then having your main banner/slider full width can be a good idea, but at least the width of your website because now it's much smaller even if you move it.

    You have good images, take advantage of that and catch the eye of the visitors and make them feel curiosity to check more stuff.

    The best way to monetize during holidays would be having your own email list and directly send them the best offers for holidays, if you don't have one already you need to work on that, you can buy and ebook with license to promote it or the best option is write your own ebook.
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  • Profile picture of the author bojan92
    First you need to get everything aligned , then to start selling. The pictures are stuck on the left on my screen. You need to look for some designer ideas to give it more vivid colors.
    Anyway those are minor adjustments one thing i am really worried about is that i did not see any links with Facebook , twitter. You must have in order to bring some more traffic on your site.
    Creating and advertising on Facebook can help a lot , and you can target the croud you want. Making some fuzz on twitter would also be a good idea.
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  • Profile picture of the author fahax
    Thanks for suggestion I hire wp developer to fix it
    how you see my content ??? is it grabbing??
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  • Profile picture of the author webcosmo
    It would be much nicer if it isn't all over the place.
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  • Profile picture of the author Dario2
    Whole site is broken :O why don't you use Website Templates | WordPress Themes | ThemeForest and find some template
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