Could you, guys, help me with my landing page?

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Hi, guys!
Recently I've got a message from a reputable member, who clicked the link in my signature:
Originally Posted by laurencewins View Post

Kalambur, the page with your free ebook on it has nowhere to add an email or to download.
I contacted him, and he added:
Originally Posted by laurencewins View Post

I don't know what else to tell you. I clicked that link and it takes me to a page where I should enter my email to get the download link. However, there isn't a place to enter email addresses.
Could you, guys, please, help me to solve this issue.
Do you see, guys, the field to enter e-mail?
I tested it using different browsers, and for me it works well.
Here is the page http://alexjuly.com/ways/
#check #guys #landing #page
  • Profile picture of the author discrat
    Hey Kalambar,
    It seems to work for me. I got a "Confirm Subscription"

    But let me add something here. You really need to do a better job on your Sq. Page in setting Expectations with potential Subs.

    Case and Point : I thought by entering my email I would download e book right then and there.

    Qualify your leads and say something like " Get Free Access". And then within the Sq.Page tell people that the E- book will be delivered straight to their Inbox ,and they will also be getting more advanced Tips and Tricks with further Emails


    - Robert Andrew

    P.S. No need to "quote" with Warriors name in your Post here
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    • Profile picture of the author GrapeApe90
      Originally Posted by discrat View Post

      Hey Kalambar,
      It seems to work for me. I got a "Confirm Subscription"

      But let me add something here. You really need to do a better job on your Sq. Page in setting Expectations with potential Subs.

      Case and Point : I thought by entering my email I would download e book right then and there.

      Qualify your leads and say something like " Get Free Access". And then within the Sq.Page tell people that the E- book will be delivered straight to their Inbox ,and they will also be getting more advanced Tips and Tricks with further Emails


      - Robert Andrew

      P.S. No need to "quote" with Warriors name in your Post here
      @Kalambur,

      Agreed ^^. Better optimizing your flow would assist in higher opt-in rates. I'm curious as to what you conversion rate is with this particular page? Are you currently testing other variables to optimize? Just by observing the above mentioned I can just about 100% pin point where your users drop off in your flow.

      FYI everything seems to work just fine with me as I can vouch for getting a "confirmed subscription".
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  • Profile picture of the author reachintan
    your landing page doesn't seem to impress much with present content...also it is too simple in visual appearance...try to put more content explaining things clearly...also make it visuall appealing so that visitors are forced to subscribe...
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    Chintan Mehta

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  • Profile picture of the author gjabiz
    Worked.

    Got the ebook. And the first paragraph...

    Before you start reading this book, I want you to know that in my personal opinion, the best way to make money online is "creating valuable assets", gaining auditory, contributing something valuable to the world, and monetizing that traffic.

    It was a tough read after that...what is gaining auditory?

    gjabiz
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  • Profile picture of the author Kalambur
    Thank you, guys!
    It seems, everything works fine.
    I will change the landing page. Thankx for your suggestions.
    Originally Posted by gjabiz View Post

    Worked.

    Got the ebook. And the first paragraph...

    Before you start reading this book, I want you to know that in my personal opinion, the best way to make money online is “creating valuable assets”, gaining auditory, contributing something valuable to the world, and monetizing that traffic.

    It was a tough read after that...what is gaining auditory?

    gjabiz
    This is what to be a non-native speaker means. I will improve my skills - I promise )
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    • Profile picture of the author gjabiz
      Originally Posted by Kalambur View Post

      Thank you, guys!
      It seems, everything works fine.
      I will change the landing page. Thankx for your suggestions.


      This is what to be a non-native speaker means. I will improve my skills - I promise )
      for a successful marketer to insure the English grammar and spelling are correct is to hire a proof reader.

      For less than 100 dollars (US) you can have a perfect product in English, and if you do translate it to other languages, it will translate OK.

      You can find them here or at Fiverr.

      Good luck.

      gjabiz
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  • Profile picture of the author Kalambur
    Thanx, guys, for your advice. Yes, I will hire a native speaker to profread that book.
    I do appreciate your attention and suggestions.
    Could you, please, take a look once more and give your opinion about this version of landing page?
    http://alexjuly.com/ways
    Better? )
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    • Profile picture of the author NetMan
      Originally Posted by Kalambur View Post

      Thanx, guys, for your advice. Yes, I will hire a native speaker to profread that book.
      I do appreciate your attention and suggestions.
      Could you, please, take a look once more and give your opinion about this version of landing page?
      Better? )
      You should hire a professional graphics designer for your ebook cover as well, pardon me but it's cheesy and looks pretty much amateurish.

      Regards,
      Andre Foisy
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