Criticism on My Blog

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Hi all,

Could you give me a few constructive criticisms on my self development blog? - NeverXD - stepping up your game

I recently made a few modifications to the design and I was wondering if you have any suggestions on how to further improve user experience and marketability.

Thanks!
#website design #blog #criticism
  • If it were me this is what I would do.

    1. You have your center area with text, stories, images and video. But the area to both sides is white. I would put a background to both sides to focus the reader to the center.

    2. I would go to Fiverr and have a really banging book cover made for my eBook. From the looks of it you made that yourself on a piece of software I know of.

    Also, that picture of you with your shirt off in your side panel does not inspire confidence. It tells me that you're a goofball kid who I should not likely listen to.

    I hope you don't mind the bluntness. You asked for it.

    Patrick
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  • Looks nice and clean to me, I like it.

    However - but that might just be personal preferences - I would slightly lower the font size!
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