Critique My Landing Page. Thoughts Appreciated.

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My first post on Warrior Forum!

Have read so much and learned a lot from the people here, and I finally decided to sign up since you guys are always so helpful and knowledgeable. It's truly an amazing place with amazing people.

Alright... so I've went through this program/training to get into internet marketing after reading and learning about it for well over a year now. The training, I must say, after being through so many programs is incredible. It really took me from a general I idea of how to do email marketing to a full blown setup with detailed and understandable guidance.

I've been through a good few programs, and even paid for some (this one the training was free) - and I couldn't be happier with the end result and how much I've learned and know.

I've now started to promote a landing page and having spent pretty much all my finances to acquire the necessary tools don't seem to be getting any conversions. Traffic is also an issue for now after having bought some cheap traffic (at not so credible places - many of the clicks were filtered by my tracker as fake).

So until I get paid money owed me, I'm attempting to work on some more sustainable traffic through web content or other methods, which I'm very open to advice on as well.

But, truly right now I want to make sure my landing page is able to perform with any traffic that does show up. I have had about a hundred visitors and it doesn't seem it's too convincing (even though this is something I believe will actually help them and change their lives! Not promoting garbage here, which used to be what I disliked when attempting to get into IM..)

So if you guys have any advice or help you could offer I'd be beyond grateful. Life as we all know is hard on everyone and it seems it's decided to press extra hard on me at the moment. Only been sleeping 4 hours a night trying to get this working as I'm in a really rough patch right now.

Thanks for any input guys! I'm truly truly grateful!

http://wechangelivesforever.online/4231
#appreciated #critique #landing #page #thoughts
  • Profile picture of the author ZanyZebra
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  • Profile picture of the author Rivelicus
    What platform are your users accessing on? The page looks awful on Chrome on Android on mobile...
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  • Profile picture of the author agmccall
    Why the redirect, what are you trying to hide
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    "Opportunity is missed by most people because it is dressed in overalls and looks like work." Thomas Edison

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  • Profile picture of the author sallaid
    1. it's very slow. 2. the text on the pic should be bigger and in the middle of the pic.
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  • Profile picture of the author zceptre
    ZanyZebra - thanks for the reminder. Tunnel vision being focused on the work. Sort of shocked that didn't hit me when I was choosing graphics...
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  • Profile picture of the author zceptre
    agmccall - It's for tracking. You can't post tracking links directly on facebook and many others as well. Plus they just look sorry.
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  • Profile picture of the author zceptre
    agmccall - An after thought here, but I do suppose you mean why the redirect here. I didn't want to include traffic from here as sales, so to know the actual number of true visitors I'd have to subtract those that were there to help me from where I was advertising ||| Rivelicus - Windows 10 with seamonkey, firefox, and internet explorer seemed fine. Very VERY grateful you let me know. I'd better start checking on mobile! ||| Sava - Thanks a ton as well! These are things you learn (so no excuse really) but after all the technical work they tend to slip an amateurs mind! You should have seen the smile on my face when I read those points and got an "aha" moment. lol ||| Sallaid - Not sure if I can fix the speed of loading without getting rid of tracking altogether, is that wise?? I've heard tracking makes and breaks a business. And the text does look silly at that size now that it's pointed out. Boy my mind goes blank with all the other work involved it seems... THANKS A TON GUYS!
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  • Profile picture of the author Unicom19
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    I get account cancelled error when opening your site.
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  • Profile picture of the author asdqwezxc1
    Your website shows error, Can't seem to load it at all.
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