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what do you think of my site?

by cjsparacino123
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i've been sending free facebook group traffic at it for a month, it hasn't converted any leads yet tho so im wondering if its the copy or the design. any feedback?

some people that i've talked to liked the site, but they were broke and lived in a different state, so i guess giving out a free ebook to build my list will break the cost barrier

anyways honest feedback?
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  • Profile picture of the author Woomeister
    Your main CTA on the landing makes me wary as there are no trust factors on page. So I wouldn't (didn't click).

    Fans for what? From Who? Free or paid for? I have no idea where clicking that link will take me.

    Have you tracked the behaviour of the traffic sent from Facebook? Bounce rate? Exit?
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  • Profile picture of the author desireedavid
    Checked out your site. Visually, it is nice.

    However...

    From the homepage itself, it is not clear what services you offer. It merely says "Need more raving fans?" -- fans for what? Who is your target market? Who needs more fans?

    And then your call to action button says "CLICK HERE TO GET MORE." -- because the previous line is unclear -- get more what? So again, I am afraid to click.

    So, I scroll down to see what it is you are offering. And then I see videos, that look like MTVs. Again, I do not feel compelled to even open the video.

    Users have to know what exactly you are offering so they can determine if they are in need of your services. You have to make them curious and interested about what it is you can do for them. And then get them to click that button. Maybe you can also place a small section at the bottom of the page where you can put testimonials of previous clients.

    I hope this helps.
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  • Profile picture of the author Logoguts
    I am really sorry, it seems like outdated.
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  • Profile picture of the author eComCoder
    You need more information about what are you actually offering and how it benefits the buyer.
    I even watched the videos and It's still not clear what that actually is what you are offering.
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