Is my website good enough?

Hi. Your signature line has a lot of words and none of them are really catching my attention. Try cutting the words down to just ones with the most impact and maybe make the link boldfaced so it stands out more. Shorten "Microsoft Excel" to "MS Excel" - also, try using words like Discover, Easy, Proven, Results, New, etc. to make your program stand out (among all the other programs) for the prospective student.

On your webpage, there is no immediate call to action - until the pop up. Also, there is a lot of precious space in the header that is just blank - try putting your offer in that space? Also, all the best info is too far down the page. Some of us still have smaller monitors so bear that in mind :-)

Hope that helps!

To be honest I would choose a different wordpress theme or hire a designer. The wordpress theme you are using looks a bit tired and not really enticing. It is not only the content which counts but also how the content is being wrapped. If you have two Christmas presents, one a diamond wrapped in newspaper and one parcel with something cheap but wrapped in shiny paper and with a ribbon, but you do not know the content, you most likely would choose the one with the most beautiful wrapping. That is the same with websites. If the presentation does not look professional, people are not very likely to take the effort to read the content or buy from you. Best Regards, Christina

Let me give you some advice about your page. Don't take any of this critique in a bad way. You are doing more than most people and you are heading in the right direction so I want to give you some advice to keep you moving forward and not discourage you.

With that being said let me jump right in...

1. The top of the page has way too much wasted space. 40% of your space is wasted on a white background with tiny letters you can hardly read. Your logo is the only thing that stands out and it tells me nothing about the THREE W's...

Where Am I?
What Can I Do Here?
Why Should I Do It?

Your top half of the page doesn't answer the question once I land on the page.

I just see your logo, small text and a big generic stock photo of people smiling. This tells me nothing about 'Where Am I and what can I do here?'.

So you need a good headline and relevant information to what people can expect once they land on your website.

2. Below that is a section about what you offer.

First of all get rid of that lousy testimonial. It screams fake and you haven't even presented an offer as to what you are even doing on this website. Why would you put a testimonial there?

That point also applies to the section where you have the 3 training courses. You haven't explained to me who you are, what you do or even gave me any reasons why I should even consider training at this point.

The 3 courses you offer are laid out great. But the benefits are all very weak and since you haven't highlighted why I should even consider training for these 3 areas. You have no shot of convincing anyone to care enough to read any of this information.

There are other things I could nitpick like the call to action and bottom part of your page are lackluster, but it's all pointless to address those points until you fix the problems I mentioned above.

If you need some further help I can go into more detail with you. Feel free to reach out to me and I'll see what I can do to point you in the right direction.

But don't let this discourage you. You are halfway there. You just need some structure on your site and some little know how with sales copy techniques and you'll have a great site to build off of.

Just so you know this type of thread could be looked at as self promotion and signature spamming there were rule changes back in March and June this year...

Hey there!


Your site loads pretty fast so that's good!


However that generic looking image of the office people is a turn off...


Try and add a personal picture or at least a branded picture!

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See there personal header image?

A few quick observations (note: I viewed it on an iPhone).

1. The logo looks kind of strange in my opinion. Doesn't seem to have any uniqueness to it or even be related to computers, teaching, learning, education, etc.
2. The green buttons on the homepage don't show in the correct area on mobile. The show underneath all of the course descriptions instead of each button showing under the appropriate course description.
3. The sales funnel seems strange to me. I would have them commit to signing up for excel training and then have them select the year they want after they sign up. There are a lot of barriers like that that you can move to after the customer has opened their wallet. Personally, I would record the training as I think it would be hard to get more than a few users to sign up for a certain day (especially at the beginning) then offer a consultation period where you answer questions 1 on 1. In my opinion, it'd be easier to get sales that way.

As far as your signature, I'd change "Stop struggling and get Results!" To something like "Master Microsoft Office in 2 Hours!"

I have to agree with most of the points above. The website does load quickly and that's awesome. Try to rework the typography of your site.

More specifically.

1. Try to make better use of the section above the fold (the hero). If registering for your workshop is the most important thing you could have your visitors do, then put up a button for them right there, on top of the fold.

2. The footer is incomplete. The social buttons seem like they are cut into two.

3. Keep the copy consistent. There are sections of copy that's in bold and the rest of it is normal. It's too distracting.

4. You might want to choose to go with full-width pages for each of your actual courses?

Ash

You shouldnt use that much real estate on a stock photo.

also: consider if your second paragraphs are better than your first, (Do you really need to tell people that Excel is a powerful and widely-used tool?)

I checked out your website and overall it looks very, very professional. Your popup window also looks great and should get you a decent opt in rate.

One small change that I would recommend that could have a huge impact is your headline.

As it is, it's not bad.

But instead of "Don't Be Left Behind" I would try the following headline instead:


I think that could help you a lot but you should definitely split test it against your current copy first and see what works best.

If you have any other questions, let me know

I would suggest you pay a visit to this section of the Warrior Forum and do some studying of the Sticky's It will help you improve your site Copywriting. A good headline and a few decent bullet points will help improve the interest in your site.

It looks nice sure, but I think if you're trying to sell Excel courses (broing no offence) then you should try to make it seem less boring.

Maybe a quiz "How much do you know about MS Word", and then when you reveal there score, be like "and this is the score needed if you want a job".

Something to make it a little more interactive. Cant put my finger on it really but im sure you get what I mean