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Please review my first website?

by melpa64
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Hi Guys

I have just completed my first business website for my new web design business targeting small businesses in my local area. I am going to start cold calling and cold emailing tomorrow. Excited and nervous at the same time. I am going to test out the packages method first rather than the usual quote method to see how that will go.

Would love your opinions on the design and the website in general and would love to hear your feedback if you guys have any.

I really appreciate your answers in advance.

hampshirewebsites co uk
#review #website
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  • Profile picture of the author Yvon Boulianne
    that`s ok for a first version but doesn`t look attractive and WOW
    You need to polish things

    Need to be WOW, i need that guy to do my website otherwise it won`t work

    good luck
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  • Profile picture of the author Valerie Pagliara Bomar
    I think you did good for a first time...only thing that really stands out to me is I don't see any legal disclaimer stuff...privacy policy...and such...otherwise looks good!!! Best wishes and good luck!
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  • Profile picture of the author jeandevenish
    Talking only about "The Look". If you want to promote web design, then yours need to be the best of them, make people say: I want something like yours!

    I see the site is quite simple. Thinks about the client:

    What is he looking for? I can see 3 things:

    - That you deliver
    - Other clients/testimonials
    - Price
    - What is the difference between this provider and doing it myself or my nephew- computer-savvy?

    Think about it. If you already defined a niche, then target that Niche, talk to them.

    I see here more interesting info in /pricing than that on the homepage. I suggest moving some of that to the homepage. Also, you can take out the PS and Squarespace information, it is not relevant to the client. You can place it in any interior page.

    Hope it helps.
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  • Profile picture of the author Mohammad Afshar
    Hey Guys!

    I am going to have my site ( https://bahargate.biz/ )
    I intend to optimized my site and incresed the speed of loading page. which plugin do you suggest?
    Thanks in advance
    Mohammad
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  • Profile picture of the author subraasingapore
    WOW factor is missing!

    Best UI/UX experience is needed!
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  • Profile picture of the author subbudesign
    Do complete your Website 100% - I can suggest the changes
    I see your Website design unfinished!
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  • Profile picture of the author Dony Kumar
    Hi,
    I think, you have still need customization work for your site. Because the site is not looking professional yet. So what you need to to:
    1. Need great homepage to attractive customer or user.
    2. Need more content like texts, images etc.
    3. Also need user friendly methods.

    Thanks.
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  • Profile picture of the author AllysaAben
    Although your landing page is not 'text heavy', it kind of gives the impression that it is, because of the lack of imagery.
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