Just Created My First Landing Page In A New Niche. Any Advice?

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Hello everyone,

I've been promoting affiliate products in the mmo niche for a few years now and I've made few good sales here and there. Since im really passionate about health and fitness, I decided to create a landing page in that niche using sendlane and drive paid traffic to it using a ppc platform called tribaladnetwork.com. When creating the landing page I didn't a section to capture emails because I already have a list. I'm just testing to see how well the page converts. Here is the page: https://mvgranger2.sendlane.com/view/naturalweightloss

If anyone could give me some advice or feedback on my page, I'd greatly appreciate it. Just want to make sure I'm headed in the right direction.
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  • I don't have much time for a deeper look but immediately noticed a spelling mistake. You might want to check that.

    Mark
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    • Thanks Mark, I just noticed that myself. I'll make changes asap.
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    • Thanks for the feedback! I really appreciate it. I figured that a video would help pre-sell the main product. That way they can decide if they think it's right for them.
  • The plural for food, is "food". No "s".

    Put a bit more spacing between paragraph, and you CTA button is not well aligned
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    • Thanks for pointing that out, I didn't even notice it until you pointed it out. I'll fix that and the spacing asap.
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    • Please don't spam my thread with irrelevant links, unless they're related in some way. Thanks
  • The color scheme looks great. How are you directing people to the landing page?
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    • Thanks for the feedback! I'm using a ppc platform called tribaladnetwork. I've gotten 240 clicks so far and 40k views. I'm also thinking about trying Bing, since I've made some sales with it before.
  • You've done a good job mostly, a clear CTA button a video (videos sales convert very well as you probably know), a fast and resposnive website, and a good headline.

    The only real advice I can give is consider mobile users with data limit that might not want to use bandwidth on the video; and offer a text-based alternative of the sales copy.
  • You are asking me to view a video-review of a weight loss program. Then I'm taking to a video about the weight loss program. Doesn't work for me.

    Also, you're wasting clicks. Have them give you their email address to get some freebie, then send them email messages asking them to buy...

    Your headline and reason to view are weak... Your program owner promises a good amount of loss in 14 days... You promise natural loss (no time frame)...

    Plus, you don't discover how to lose weight, you discover a review of a program that promises you lose weight...

    Too many disconnects, if you ask me.

    Plus, who are you after...The people tired of trying to lose weight... too broad to be useful.

    Are you a woman between 36 and 50 who's been trying to lose 10-20 lbs forever and a day?

    Are you a woman who can't lose weight because of diabetes?

    Are you a flatulent retired man who can't lose weight?

    Niche down and build a list, don't send directly to the sales page.
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    • Thanks for the feedback, you made a lot of good points. The review video is just there to presell the program, that way the visitor can make a decision on whether or not they want to learn more about it. I know how important building an email list is, but at this point in time, I'm not really interested in building a list. I might create another similar landing page with an opt-in form and see which one converts better. The text in the header of the landing page is promoting the program on the next page, not the review video itself. I'm mostly targeting people who want to lose weight naturally without using supplements or medications. You're right about being more specific in my targeting. I'll work on choosing a more targeted audience. Thanks again.
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  • Get a email opt in form below the video, you are losing possible subscribers by making them take an extra step.
  • My first click to your site, I tried the disclaimer, terms and privacy policy button and it is not working.
    Then I click on the Give Me Access button. Yeay! I am in the sales page. You don't tell me to give my email. thanks! then I close the site.
    After reading this forum, I realize I did not check the video. I decided to go again and when I watch the video, I x the site after a few seconds.
    Reasons: It's not you talking.
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    Just Created My First Landing Page In A New Niche. Any Advice?

    Hello everyone, I've been promoting affiliate products in the mmo niche for a few years now and I've made few good sales here and there. Since im really passionate about health and fitness, I decided to create a landing page in that niche using sendlane and drive paid traffic to it using a ppc platform called tribaladnetwork.com. When creating the landing page I didn't a section to capture emails because I already have a list. I'm just testing to see how well the page converts. Here is the page: https://mvgranger2.sendlane.com/view/naturalweightloss