What do you think of the squeeze page I designed today.....?

I'd switch the image over to the left and optin over to the right. The money image is way too dark and needs to be cropped better. I'm also not convinced by yellow text on a light blue background. It makes the whole page appear quite harsh.

Just my humble opinion. I'm not a designer but those are just my gut feelings about it.

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Steve Wells

17 years ago

Originally Posted by Andy Marco

The image on the right is actually a screen shot of a video....it normally would be playing as soon as they hit visit the page. I did not allow the video to play in the squeeze page yet........

The crop is because I overlayed it the actual video with a screen shot, when it actually plays it looks perfect....

Yes, the yellow is dramatic, but I am trying to attract the viewer to the headline first then the video second then the topt in box third, the way the eye always naturally moves is from the left to the right in a zig zag motion........so things are set up for the natural eye flow..........

The person I designed this for wanted the video on the right not the left...I think he wants something a bit diff than the standard look of all video squeeze pages.....

I will find out what he thinks soon I guess....

Thanks for you input...not hard feelings at all, its always good to get others opinions and then learn from them......'even if you are not a desiger you could have a great idea..............

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Daniel Rickfold 17 years ago

instead of yellow try orange and see if you can pull it off
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- Steve Wells 17 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by antipot
  
  instead of yellow try orange and see if you can pull it off
  
  I well do that.....thanks......
  
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InternetSuccess001

17 years ago

The squeeze page looks fairly clean.

However, is that a picture of you? If it is, I might try taking a different picture. While it is a pretty good picture, I might remove the goti (because it looks a bit like a used car salesman, at least some of the ones around here). Afterwards, that may improve conversions a bit.

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Steve Wells

17 years ago

Originally Posted by mariozubair

I think the yellow text need a little gradient so that it can come life with the background..
the image is perfect,but i think u should increase the contrast..it look kinda pale..

other than that,job well done..very professional

Thanks, I wanted the text to pop out- orange is the perfect color complimentary color for blue, so I will adjust it unlesss the person i designed it for likes the yellow.....

I will play with the contrast............

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Steve Wells

17 years ago

Originally Posted by InternetSuccess001

Nope, not a pic of me.......the guy does look a little like a slime ball if you ask me......lol.......

It was designed for someone else, its not the final yet.......

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coolice 17 years ago

The design doesn't seem right under firefox. Are you making any changes currently?
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- aaallday2010 17 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by coolice
  
  The design doesn't seem right under firefox. Are you making any changes currently?
  
  I agree, your page is all over the place in Firefox. The words are all on top of each other.
  
  Not sure why. Have you looked at this in multiple browsers?
  
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  Steve Wells 17 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by aaallday2010
  
  I agree, your page is all over the place in Firefox. The words are all on top of each other.
  
  Not sure why. Have you looked at this in multiple browsers?
  
  Yes I know, I have it fixed but havent uploaded the corrected version yet sorry, I will soon....
  
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  stellamary 17 years ago
  
  You can make the color changes with a good designer...keep sharing.
  
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  Steve Wells 17 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by stellamary
  
  You can make the color changes with a good designer...keep sharing.
  
  What? I am confused? What are you talking about...........?
  
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