Hello, i'm new here, i would like to have your review.

14 years ago

Welcome to Warrior Forum...

I took a look at your site and my thoughts:

1. Don't like your logo.

2. You should put a tag line under your logo stating what your site sells for us under educated people. I have no idea what e-cigarettes are. I'm too lazy to read all the text to figure out what you offer.

3. The map looks cool but I think it's a big gimmicky. I would prefer a searchable list of suppliers.

4. Your Wordpress theme has been used to death. Ask yourself, what is unique about my website? What makes it stand apart from the competition. For example ECigarettes...a healthier alternative to cigarettes! is a much easier to use and understand. Take some tips for them and move forward.

Good luck.

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Jim Gillum

14 years ago

I too do not like the header....cool but hard to read...
The map is a waste of space...
The first headline is not attention grabbing.....

hope that helps a little...

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Antonio Gavrila

14 years ago

The website should take some improvements cause at this moment it's not very nice.
You could start with the following things:
1.Change your WordPress Theme
2.Change your header

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Tony Shui

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AlexaM

14 years ago

Hey,the site does not seem to be attractive...i would suggest you to work on the theme and be specific about what you are offering....

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lr89 14 years ago

something you can quickly change: no more times, at least change the font to Arial. This will give it a better look and feel. Times is not good anymore...
Change the color of the highlighted square.
good luck! !
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lr89

14 years ago

and i also agree with the suggestion of resizing your map, it is big!

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ekon

14 years ago

Hi,
I am new in this forum I am equally agree with the others opinion you can take any suggestion from the above. Thanks!

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birneyj

14 years ago

I dont like to have to sift through a lot of text to find information...

Personally, I would eliminate the map on homepage and replace with picture of ecig,
Setup bullet list of features and benefits, followed by excerpts of articles.

I would place a link for "Locate Supplier near you" in several prominent places on the page that takes the buyer to a page with the map and list of vendors. I may setup a vendors page where customers can rate the vendor on shipping times, cust support, etc.

Also, as mentioned above, Change the font

for what it's worth, that is what i think

Jim

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Jarenas

14 years ago

Gentlemen, sorry for my late answer.
I really appreciate your advices and time you dedicated to make a brilliant analysis of my site.
I find right all your advises and critics.
The problem i have now is: my webmaster stepped back due his PHD to write, so i'm without webmaster and in the middle of nothing

I think: there's a lot of smart people here, if anyone want to step forward and, with all the advices you made, just make some modify to the site, you can contact me trough skype. Please do it only if you are willing to not ask too much for this. All your contacts will be higly appreciated.
Also, in respect of this place, we can discuss here your candidacy, so everybody are welcome to give their point of view. (and make their price

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Orlando Web Design

14 years ago

Originally Posted by Jarenas

I think: there's a lot of smart people here, if anyone want to step forward and, with all the advices you made, just make some modify to the site, you can contact me trough skype. Please do it only if you are willing to not ask too much for this.

Could all you smart people also please build or change some of my website designs ??

Thanks in advance

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Jarenas

14 years ago

Originally Posted by Orlando Web Design

Could all you smart people also please build or change some of my website designs ??

Thanks in advance

Lol i say for real, if someone want to help me, just make a price and i'll consider that, then i'll pay, then they'll help me on my site.
My webmaster knowledge is equal to zero. I have this friend of mine that stepped back and i even can't add affiliates

Sad situation!

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thefreelancesquad

14 years ago

Hello and Welcome

I reviewed the website and it just seems to be plain. I really didn't like the navigation menu cramped in the top of the website. The footer also seems to be crowded.

It seems like a goof first try. Try making some tweaks to the theme.

Good Luck!

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Jarenas

14 years ago

Originally Posted by thefreelancesquad

Hello and Welcome

I reviewed the website and it just seems to be plain. I really didn't like the navigation menu cramped in the top of the website. The footer also seems to be crowded.

It seems like a goof first try. Try making some tweaks to the theme.

Good Luck!

I would surely try, the problem is: i'm not a webmaster :confused:

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scriptkido

14 years ago

I think you need more color ....
but I like smile face in the footer...

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Kay King 14 years ago

You are missing the market - you have a great domain for sales of these products and they are selling rapidly.

If that were my domain I'd be selling the top brands of e-cigs - with info articles and facts listed in a side panel. The main panel would be all e-cigarettes - with descriptions, testimonials, etc - for sale.

I'd dump the massive tag cloud and focus on sales. Up front - why you would choose ecigarettes - why you would use them - who would use them - and here are the best ones....buy now.

I think you need to visit some other competing sites and see what they are doing.

But - that's just me...

kay
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troykrause

14 years ago

I also agree. I like the logo, but the header could use some work. The map seems to be the main focus. I'd move that to a separate maybe. The theme is very plain and could use some color. I might also add an opt in form along with a free give away to capture visitors info. Good luck and I hope you find the help that you are looking for.

P.S. You might want to share some of this info with your previous webmaster. I hope he didn't charge you too much. If he did, I hope he invested it into some education on blog creation

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Tredi Andrasa

14 years ago

Make the map smaller, you also need to provide graphic elements related to your products. Also your logo seems look less attractive and less to show the character of the products you sell. Hope that's help

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