Critical website review please

by sparky
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Hi, my major sales window is now in the lead up to Mother's Day. Have tried to make everything stand out clearly, and keep clicks to a minimum to make it easy for visitors to order, but have I ended up making it too cluttered.

All feedback and suggestions gratefully accepted.
Regards
Sparky
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  • Profile picture of the author perryny
    You seemed to have forgotten a little piece of info in your request...
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  • yah, lol...small but important piece of info....can you figure out what?
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    • Profile picture of the author eshera
      I can't guess....would love to take a look, I will keep on guessing.
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  • Profile picture of the author sparky
    Sorry guys, felt sure I'd pasted in the URL. Unless I'm deemed not to have enough posts to qualify for links yet.
    Just in case here it is without the www. preface
    tomakemymotherproud.com

    Thanks for your time and apologies for the lack of URL however caused
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  • Profile picture of the author Tredi Andrasa
    Your site is look not so convincing for your target visitor..try with something sleek and clean design with no use of cluttered design. I hope this suggestion help
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    • Profile picture of the author awyne
      Originally Posted by artsurd View Post

      Your site is look not so convincing for your target visitor..try with something sleek and clean design with no use of cluttered design. I hope this suggestion help
      I agree. Website design plays a vital role in a website, this will attract users. Your site design is not that appealing so maybe you can change or edit it to more decent, clean and more user friendly. Good Luck
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    • Profile picture of the author kittyd
      oh, dear.... mr. Sparky, there is alot of work to be done so that site can look right. I`m not sure if hiring somebdy wouldn`t be the best solution, but i`m aware that alot of pride comes from the trials of doing it yourself

      so here i go...
      • left aligned sites are "out of fashion". even if they are done today, and stated clearly that it is the newest site on the internet, the visistor will believe it is done in the last century...
      • the box on the left, that blue.... that huge embossed border.... they really need to go. i know that the opin box must be kept, but maybe a white one with no or very thin border might look better. Even so, i believe it would look even better centere and larger in width underneath the content...
      • i like theheader, but it is a little pixelated and the fonts on the 3 phrases don`t really match
      • i love the background image, check the "contact us" page as it repeats there just vertically
      i hope i din`t totally turn u off, it is a nice start and nice idea... all the rest... that is why u opened this thread for, right?:p
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  • Profile picture of the author TheKeys
    I'm not a fan of the design either. Make it less clutered please.
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  • Profile picture of the author Big Squid
    Yeah, there is a lot of design work needed.

    It'd probably be much easier just to use Wordpress to get the basics of design and balance down.
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