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Review My 10 in 1 Web Site

by Rob Cook
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Hello Friends
i have constructed one website based on 10 in 1 Automotibe Site
http://www.automobilesupersite.com i would like to know your suggestion which help me to get some better result in coming times.

looking for your kind suggestion

thanks in Advance
#review #site #web
  • Profile picture of the author PEIProfit_Katie
    Took too long to load.I would perhaps vary the colour scheme - my attention doesn't stay long under blue everywhere haha. Nice SEO work.
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  • Profile picture of the author I4Visual
    hi there

    I would remove the images scrolling up and down adn with the words going from right to left I found it really confusing on the eye, you can always push the name to the irght and stick in a logo on the left! Having a logo always helps with the businesses corporate look.
    Also, there is an awful lot of advertising right near the top of the page, it really gives the wrong impression, your site looks like a directory on first impression.
    The design could be improved too, it seems really square and a bit out of date, a new modern design would work wonders.
    You have a broken image, I don't know if you're aware but: "used Equipment For Sale" is the title of the image and it's broken
    You also have server errors whenever I click a picture within your site.
    Goodwork on the SEO yeah^^ probably the best thing about the site, just trying to keep the review balanced there.
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  • Profile picture of the author Arrowsharp
    Everything is a bit bulked together, personally I would revise the layout so everything is a little more spaced out; the text certainly so the site would be easier to navigate. Also as already said, it is rather slow to load.
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  • Profile picture of the author vpgemini
    I agree with the above commentors. Too much adsense and I would change text to be a bit darker and easier to read.

    Also the scrolling marquis on the right is too short. Can't really read it and its going very quickly.
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  • Profile picture of the author GeJo
    Loading time is a serious issue, because some user can leave without seeing your content. It takes some time load. Elements are closer to each other, looks crowded. And i dont like the scroll bar inside the page. It's odd. I think the most important is loading time.
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  • Profile picture of the author JLGMarketingSolutions
    I like it...but its too cluttered in the middle..clean it up a bit!
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  • Profile picture of the author ComputerGirl
    For me it also took a very long time to load your page ... So it you can do something about it, then definitely do it!

    About other things, there is a little bit too much of text that is running everywhere, it is hard to concentrate and understand what does your page offers!

    I am not sure what you think, but I would move upper that menu (Home, About us ...), because at first glance it is even hard to get that it is a menu in that place where it is right now.
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    • Profile picture of the author Rob Cook
      Thanks for your suggestion & defiantly i will do some about its time to load, is there any suggestion about Design ?
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      • Profile picture of the author MKaren
        Too many text.,the picture is not attractive at all and clutters around..too slow to load...:| I will navigate immediately when i land in this site..by the way high way i love that you put navigation portion beneath the page because of the convenience.

        no comment about the design;|i just dont see the point of scrolling up and down side pic of cars...;0
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  • Profile picture of the author gfsocial
    The use of white space.. is what makes a site look good.. your site is missing white space... too much text photos.. etc..

    the load time is likely due to your scrolling image script... its not needed at all...
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    • Profile picture of the author luis23
      Originally Posted by gfsocial View Post

      The use of white space.. is what makes a site look good.. your site is missing white space... too much text photos.. etc..

      the load time is likely due to your scrolling image script... its not needed at all...

      I will agree with that.

      I think there are to many Google Ads but this vary from people to people. In my case I don't like to see to much of that and specially that I have to scroll all the way to the bottom to see the actual pictures of the items.
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      • Profile picture of the author Rob Cook
        regarding ads on our site i can't do as its our client's site well about the time to get load i have done some changes in my Style & CSS include, i hope now its working well, is there any comment about layout & navigation.
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  • Profile picture of the author TavaTea
    Those moving pictures make me dizzy .......anyway look great!nice job mate
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