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Does this banner look okay?

by TonyAG
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I'm launching my first product soon. What do you guys think about the banner?

traffic-overdrive[dot]com

Sorry if I'm breaking the rules. I know I'm not allowed to post URLs yet due to my post count.

Any opinions will be appreciated.
#banner
  • Profile picture of the author Vincenzo Oliva
    The banner itself is pretty good, takes up a lot of space, but definitely catches your eye. The Tag line in the banner doesn't make sense. Maybe "...put your website on the high traffic internet superhighway?"

    Under the banner get rid of the title again and bring up the red headline, but improve that, 3 benefits and an interesting unique twist.
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    • Profile picture of the author TonyAG
      Thank you, I currently have a webmaster working on the website so changes may take a while.
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  • Profile picture of the author IndigoJack
    It's ok but it would be better if it was not so tall because the text is too small compared to the size of the banner and the amount of empty space around "Traffic Overdrive".
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  • Profile picture of the author computerfan
    Looks massive with great impact. Wow! Probably, I would reduce it a little!
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  • Profile picture of the author weaveronline
    banner is really cool
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    Reach us at dukeduke600@gmail.com.
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  • Profile picture of the author rawservices
    The banner text needs to be yellow, blue and yellow combination is the best for the target demographic your going for.

    Also, the smaller white text needs to have no pattern behind it.

    Hope this helps :-)

    -Ryan
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  • Profile picture of the author DianeBrandt
    The banner text needs to go away.
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    • Profile picture of the author csmcmanus
      looks good, except for the lack of dropshadow on the left side that matches the div below it.
      i like what you are trying to do with the 3d lettering.
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  • Profile picture of the author Johnny12345
    I think it's a bit too tall. And I'm not fond of the money flying around -- it's rather cliche.

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  • Profile picture of the author jesus72knight
    7 out of 10. Good enough. Just wanna know. Are these images royalty free or was it just taken from Google search?
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  • Profile picture of the author mesimoniv
    as others have stated definitely too tall; taking up too much valuable screen space.

    The copy makes no sense (at least to a native english speaker so that should change
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  • Profile picture of the author Mark Pitt
    Overall looks pretty good to me, just that text in the top right corner needs a grammar check,

    I think the phrase "Put your websites on the high traffic highway!" would be fine. Or maybe "Expert strategies to put your websites on the high traffic highway!"
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  • Profile picture of the author TechGuy1
    Yeah it looks good...but still can look better! Looks li'l edgy. Try to give it a smoother look. You can probably use more relevant images.fair Job!
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