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Just finished redesigning a page for a client i want to hear some feedback from you guys to make it better.

Shred Academy

Thanks!
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  • Profile picture of the author DavidO
    The design itself is excellent. The only thing I see that could be improved in the font. You need a font that's more expansive and easier to read against the dark background. The font you're using (Arial it looks like) is too dense, especially in the smaller size.

    Verdana would be easier to read. Or any font with wider spacing and kerneling.

    Otherwise, nice job.
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  • Profile picture of the author SteveFinch
    That's a fantastic logo as is the site as a whole. But as David said, for the site to be really, really tip top, the text would be easier to read if the spacing between the letters was greater. I did find myself having to re-read it every half a dozen words or so.
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  • Profile picture of the author Revenant45
    It looks just like the other site you were asking a critique for not too long ago. Versatility is sorely lacking.
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  • Profile picture of the author wbdzgnr
    @DavidO
    This is actually verdana, the kernelling maybe off a little i'll try to fix that

    @Revenant45
    I appreciate your comment, but that was the style the client wanted. It just happened that i am into this type of design also but i can do anything it just depends on what the client wants.
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  • Profile picture of the author webgain
    design is cool but there are few recommendations for your website.
    use another font
    few attractive images
    highlight the text background design
    USE attractive font for headings.
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  • Profile picture of the author 365Daysof
    Dark backgrounds (to me) always need larger text, bolder text, and wider line spacing for readability.

    That said, if your target market is young men I they may be able to read it just fine, L0L!
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  • Profile picture of the author signity2
    great work keep it up
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  • Profile picture of the author wbdzgnr


    new design...some feedback would be great to improve the design

    thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author Shelle-K
    Don't forget to add your copyright footer! It would suck for someone to steal your work

    Originally Posted by wbdzgnr View Post

    Just finished redesigning a page for a client i want to hear some feedback from you guys to make it better.

    Shred Academy

    Thanks!
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  • Profile picture of the author soliddesign
    I like it, you might look into some font replacement technologies to spice up your work in general. @Font-Face and Google Font API are two of my favorites. The days of the web-safe fonts are numbered. (thank god).

    Best of Luck
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  • Profile picture of the author assmithamanda6
    nice one! superb!
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    • Profile picture of the author techntuts
      Nice design. But i think you might have used some light background like grey. Any how thats your site.

      Thank you...
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  • Profile picture of the author VOnline
    MangoLean looks great!
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  • Profile picture of the author Annel
    Good looking mango
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  • Profile picture of the author EvaBrown
    I like your design. It looks really good. Do you have live demo?
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  • Profile picture of the author mjarel
    nice combo of colors.
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  • Profile picture of the author Ozwald01
    Nice site...
    Love the colors! They all fit together perfectly, as though you used a 'color-wheel'.
    I also love mangos.
    Now you tell me that I can lose weight by eating them?
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  • Profile picture of the author RyanAndrews
    brandasaur.com is returning Server not found at the moment, but from the image, it's an amazing design.
    One of those vague concepts to define, and hard to achieve is that "It flows well".
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  • Profile picture of the author Stipe
    Looks totally eye-candy! Bravo!
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  • Profile picture of the author Davy44
    Good job. It's a web designed site for the niche. I particularly like the color scheme.

    Well done!
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  • Profile picture of the author hari12345
    its cool.....great design..... i especially liked the logo
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  • Profile picture of the author rain21
    great dude, it looks good, I don't see any errors there
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  • Profile picture of the author aokiji1
    Theme and color was cool =)
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  • Profile picture of the author MammothStrength
    Nice design, like the logo.
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    • Profile picture of the author hubertmulligan
      The logo is good but the background seems to be inappropriate to the site.
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  • Profile picture of the author robinsden
    This looks like you put together a nice site. One thing that might help out is a short 2 minute sample video pre-view of what people will be buying into when they purchase your service. Also 5 bucks is kinda low. I'd say about 15 or 20 would be more around the right price. Still cheap so you'll get the people but your not giving the service away this way.
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    • Profile picture of the author GreyMan
      I really like the guitar site. Dark backgrounds look both understated and dramatic. It probably helps I'm in the market for learning the guitar. But I'd say it ticks all the right boxes.
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  • Profile picture of the author logowarriors
    I like your site. Nice color theme and effects, looking very professional. Good work all the best.
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  • Profile picture of the author HamEBooks
    Very nice designs!

    On the Shred academy a small spelling mistake :

    66 licks
    "This tools is usually sold for $49.95 " should be "This tool is usually sold for 49.95$" but apart from that, very nice page
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  • Profile picture of the author chaseclicks
    Nice designs, both look great!
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  • Profile picture of the author marksz
    burning guitar looks wild, attention grabber for sure
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