Warriors, could you take a quick look and give me your opinion?

by sam770
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Hey Guys,
could you take a quick look and give me your opinion?
All I need to know is if it looks user friendly, is it inviting, simple, clear?

loyalwriter.com

Many Thanks!

Sam
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  • Profile picture of the author MichaelG469
    I like it, very simple and clear. Only concern from a person interested in buying content is that all of your article services are for 400-450 words. $17 for 400 is pretty steep. Most people want to have articles/posts of at least 500 words, so consider upping your word count. Or at least consider offering a package with a 500-550 word count option. Thats just a personal opinion of mine.
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    • Profile picture of the author sam770
      Originally Posted by MichaelG469 View Post

      I like it, very simple and clear. Only concern from a person interested in buying content is that all of your article services are for 400-450 words. $17 for 400 is pretty steep. Most people want to have articles/posts of at least 500 words, so consider upping your word count. Or at least consider offering a package with a 500-550 word count option. Thats just a personal opinion of mine.
      Thanks,
      your comment is appreciated,
      we spend lots of time on each article for research to make it top quality, SEO oriented, so I think that $17 is definitely a fair price and in fact this is the feedback we get from your clients.
      However, I do agree with you that the standard length should be from 450-500 and almost always our articles end up in this range of words.
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  • Profile picture of the author ronywilliam
    Your website is simple and surely clear.. but it looked a bit dull to me..
    The info part on the left hand side has some problem when we scroll the coursor on it.
    It shows up smoothely but then it starts blinking...
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    • Profile picture of the author sam770
      yes, I see that! I am going to fix this, Thanks a lot!

      Originally Posted by ronywilliam View Post

      It shows up smoothely but then it starts blinking...
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  • Profile picture of the author Emma Francina
    hmm i agree with what michael said.
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  • Profile picture of the author WillR
    Why do I feel like we have already seen this same thread for this same website only a month or so ago?

    Oh yes, that's why...

    http://www.warriorforum.com/main-int...r-website.html
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    • Profile picture of the author sam770
      You are not wrong,
      I asked for a quick review about 2 months ago but I made a few changes and I would like to hear your opinion

      Originally Posted by WillR View Post

      Why do I feel like we have already seen this same thread for this same website only a month or so ago?

      Oh yes, that's why...

      http://www.warriorforum.com/main-int...r-website.html
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  • Profile picture of the author samstephan9
    it's looking simple and user friendly too.
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    • Profile picture of the author sam770
      Thanks for that!
      Originally Posted by samstephan9 View Post

      it's looking simple and user friendly too.
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  • Profile picture of the author Alan Raymond
    I like it it's clean and does what it's supposed to. In fact I've bookmarked it.
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    • Profile picture of the author sam770
      Thanks a lot
      Originally Posted by Bannoi View Post

      I like it it's clean and does what it's supposed to. In fact I've bookmarked it.
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  • Profile picture of the author Logo Design
    Your Website is user friendly..I must say,You are genius
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    • Profile picture of the author wcardinal
      Sam-
      As was mentioned prior, your prices are "high" considering that the articles could very well be written in Pakistan. How do we know? Since it has such a generic look, there is nothing for me to really believe that you are reputable, english-speaking professional writers.

      My initial reaction, since the prices are on the homepage and very litle else to catch my eye - is to move on.

      Why not move the photos and brief bios of your crew to the homepage? Let's see some personality. Then link EACH photo and bio to a page dedicated to just that writer. They should each write their own bio page, showing their personality and writing style. People are more likely to want to hire a "person" than a writer, I think.

      Warren
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      • Profile picture of the author sam770
        Thanks Warren,
        Yes, I do think that "personalizing" the site might be a good idea, I will consider it, but I got many other good feedbacks (also outside of the warrior forum) regarding my site that let me believe that it is good looking and very inviting, yet clear and simple.

        I have to disagree with you about the pricing issue, $17 for a really good, 100% original article is NOT a lot, especially due to the fact that in most cases our articles rank very high on Google!
        We do not save any efforts to make them good, even when a serious research is required!

        In fact, I know of other professional writers that charge much more for a similar level of content.

        Originally Posted by wcardinal View Post

        Sam-
        As was mentioned prior, your prices are "high" considering that the articles could very well be written in Pakistan. How do we know? Since it has such a generic look, there is nothing for me to really believe that you are reputable, english-speaking professional writers.

        My initial reaction, since the prices are on the homepage and very litle else to catch my eye - is to move on.

        Why not move the photos and brief bios of your crew to the homepage? Let's see some personality. Then link EACH photo and bio to a page dedicated to just that writer. They should each write their own bio page, showing their personality and writing style. People are more likely to want to hire a "person" than a writer, I think.

        Warren
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  • Profile picture of the author ehawkmarketer
    Very clean interface, the text is seated on the left, and there is a video intro on the right. Your logo could be more memorable (than a thumbs up). It could use a bit more color and textures, but right now it seems pretty functional.

    Your left hand column contact form looks a little small on my screen. Can you increase the font to make it look larger?
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    • Profile picture of the author sam770
      Thanks ehawkmarketer,
      Yes, I know that the left table looks a bit smaller, its the way each browser "draw" the table on the screen
      With FF it looks a bit smaller, with IE and Chrome it looks ok

      Originally Posted by ehawkmarketer View Post

      Very clean interface, the text is seated on the left, and there is a video intro on the right. Your logo could be more memorable (than a thumbs up). It could use a bit more color and textures, but right now it seems pretty functional.

      Your left hand column contact form looks a little small on my screen. Can you increase the font to make it look larger?
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  • Profile picture of the author SteveFinch
    I've looked at it from a design point of view only, and have to say I like it. It's a nice clean layout and appears to me to be easy to navigate around.
    All in all from a design point of view, that's a nice job. Well done!!
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    • Profile picture of the author sam770
      Thanks, I appreciate that

      Originally Posted by SteveFinch View Post

      I've looked at it from a design point of view only, and have to say I like it. It's a nice clean layout and appears to me to be easy to navigate around.
      All in all from a design point of view, that's a nice job. Well done!!
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  • Profile picture of the author LeadRival
    I agree with the simplicity of the site. It's to the point and gives you pretty much all the info you need right here on the home page.

    couple suggestions though:

    1. Color is proven to cause the brain to react differently... you should get rid of the gray and replace with a color that says "here I am, stay a while".
    2. the "info" slider bar is a GREAT idea... but i didn't even notice it until Ronywilliam mentioned it. Is it possible to make it about an inch wider. (the content is so far to the right that our eyes naturally push that way. making seeing that "sidebar" not so good)
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    • Profile picture of the author sam770
      Thanks a lot for your feedback

      Originally Posted by LeadRival View Post

      I agree with the simplicity of the site. It's to the point and gives you pretty much all the info you need right here on the home page.

      couple suggestions though:

      1. Color is proven to cause the brain to react differently... you should get rid of the gray and replace with a color that says "here I am, stay a while".
      2. the "info" slider bar is a GREAT idea... but i didn't even notice it until Ronywilliam mentioned it. Is it possible to make it about an inch wider. (the content is so far to the right that our eyes naturally push that way. making seeing that "sidebar" not so good)
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  • Profile picture of the author Epic Stephen
    The site looks good and clean, I would change the header/logo tho.. a smoother logo and some colors, also I would move the logo with the text to the far left.
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