How can I improve my design?

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Hi everybody!
Here's my first landing page (signature below)
What can I improve there? Or everything is allright?
Thank you.
#design #improve
  • Profile picture of the author xtrapunch
    Good going! Keep posting the same thread over and over again. Absolutely love to read your posts.
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    • Profile picture of the author Souldja
      Originally Posted by xtrapunch View Post

      Good going! Keep posting the same thread over and over again. Absolutely love to read your posts.
      I think that I'm not really bothering you?
      I don't see nothing bad in my wish to improve my page.
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      • Profile picture of the author xtrapunch
        Originally Posted by Souldja View Post

        I think that I'm not really bothering you?
        You have posted the same thing at least four times. Why don't you Google, look at other places or hire a designer? What you are doing is called spamming. Doesn't help anyone.
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        • Profile picture of the author Souldja
          Originally Posted by xtrapunch View Post

          You have posted the same thing at least four times. Why don't you Google, look at other places or hire a designer? What you are doing is called spamming. Doesn't help anyone.
          I don't spamming, I don't promote anything.. I just asking.
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          • Profile picture of the author addison.agnote
            Originally Posted by Souldja View Post

            I don't spamming, I don't promote anything.. I just asking.

            having one post is enough my dear
            Maybe it was not your intention to spam here but you're already doing it (unintentionally).
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  • Profile picture of the author xtrapunch
    I don't know what you call it, but in my part of the world it is called spamming.
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    • Profile picture of the author Souldja
      Originally Posted by xtrapunch View Post

      I don't know what you call it, but in my part of the world it is called spamming.
      Let it be how you call it.
      Nobody wants to give me an answer after your post
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      • Profile picture of the author xtrapunch
        I am not to blame. I did try to help you in your first post. What do you expect people to do when they get to see the same old post over and over again?
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        • Profile picture of the author Souldja
          Originally Posted by xtrapunch View Post

          I am not to blame. I did try to help you in your first post. What do you expect people to do when they get to see the same old post over and over again?
          Ok. You're right.
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  • Profile picture of the author matthewhell
    I will give an answer. Stop all the arguing. Doesn't do any good. From my professional opinion, I believe you should not have to different optins. You have a report optin and a newsletter optin. Or are they the same and I am misunderstanding. I like the page, its simple so its not confusing. For some reason though, I feel it needs more "spark" you could say. Maybe a picture of a couple or a relationship picture. Something. When I first visited it, I saw the title but it didn't jump out at me. I would maybe also add a video of you addressing dating concerns or something to stimulate emotion. I know that will help. How is your conversion? or your optin rate?

    Hope this helps!
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    • Profile picture of the author Souldja
      Originally Posted by matthewhell View Post

      I will give an answer. Stop all the arguing. Doesn't do any good. From my professional opinion, I believe you should not have to different optins. You have a report optin and a newsletter optin. Or are they the same and I am misunderstanding. I like the page, its simple so its not confusing. For some reason though, I feel it needs more "spark" you could say. Maybe a picture of a couple or a relationship picture. Something. When I first visited it, I saw the title but it didn't jump out at me. I would maybe also add a video of you addressing dating concerns or something to stimulate emotion. I know that will help. How is your conversion? or your optin rate?

      Hope this helps!
      Thank you. There are two opt-in boxes which lead to one newsletter. I think about picture of happy man and woman except yellow envelope. And also I think about targeting.. Should I target to women only? My guide will be useful for women, and newsletter tips too. And in my newsletter I will try to sell books about lovemaking techniques, secrets etc.. And I think maybe I should targeting only on women in marriage? But I'm afraid, because it's very specific niche. Any ideas?
      Since I started this landing page I have no subscribers. My conversion is very low. I have 25 visitors and 0 subscribers.
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  • Profile picture of the author rauff
    As my concern its looks good
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  • Profile picture of the author Rob Actis
    Here are a few thoughts,

    Spell check your copy.
    Hire a designer to improve the look of the ebook.

    Good Luck.
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  • Profile picture of the author matthewhell
    They more targeted you are the better the response will be. Targeting women is a good idea if the books are aimed at mostly women. I see you have books about both. Did you know women make up 80-85% of the buyer market on the internet! From my experience, I have several websites that are not in my "real Name" and I specailize in the niche of weight loss due to myself being a personal trainer. When I target women and their needs I get a huge response than if I did men and weight loss. I don't know alot about your niche, but research would be a good thing to do. I would look at all your competition and see what they are targeting. Test ads or headlines through adwords if you can or small offline newspaper marketing. Or even twitter tweets. If you have a large following, I test a lot of headlines in tweets. Seems to work great for me. But all in all...I would definately add some human pictures on it and get that warm, relationship feeling when someone comes to the page.
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  • Profile picture of the author matthewhell
    Also real quick before I go...I would test your conversion after you generate more traffic first. Marketing your site is key. YOu have to think of site as a billboard in the middle of the dessert! You need to get cars driving by to see you and take action if you know what I mean.
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  • Profile picture of the author dsouravs
    Well I am myself a web designer and your site looks dull and flat.
    Hire a designer to redesign it with clear call to action since its a sales page.
    Take care of SEO and internet marketing after its designed.

    Thnx
    TC
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  • Profile picture of the author JerrickYeoh
    with your website i can't get much thing from there which do not convince me to get more news from your site. No strong call to action and content is not enough .
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  • Profile picture of the author EvaBrown
    I think you need to redesign it. It looks terrible, just improvements will not help
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  • Profile picture of the author Web Tempest
    A good start. Try to find a successful page on a similar topic and use that as a guide. Step 1 in my opinion would be to change the top font - looks like WordArt in Microsoft word 1998 or something
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  • Profile picture of the author wanjugu
    Members,kindly offer me some suggestions on how to improve my site below.My main business activity is event planning,cakes baking and meat supplies with FREE delivery within Nairobi,Kenya.
    Thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author cherryberry
    It looks good, as it is on the white BG, but to my opinion it lacks use of colors. If the colors are used properly, the design will really look good.
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  • Profile picture of the author Sam Rob
    Things to Be Improved
    + Make a Nice Header {It's too basic}
    + Put Some Nice Background {Try Some Gradients}
    + Hire a Web Designer to Make it Look More Professional or Make it on Wordpress and Choose a Suitable Theme.


    Hope it Helps.
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