How can I improve my design?

Good going! Keep posting the same thread over and over again. Absolutely love to read your posts.

I don't know what you call it, but in my part of the world it is called spamming.

I will give an answer. Stop all the arguing. Doesn't do any good. From my professional opinion, I believe you should not have to different optins. You have a report optin and a newsletter optin. Or are they the same and I am misunderstanding. I like the page, its simple so its not confusing. For some reason though, I feel it needs more "spark" you could say. Maybe a picture of a couple or a relationship picture. Something. When I first visited it, I saw the title but it didn't jump out at me. I would maybe also add a video of you addressing dating concerns or something to stimulate emotion. I know that will help. How is your conversion? or your optin rate?

Hope this helps!

As my concern its looks good

Here are a few thoughts,

Spell check your copy.
Hire a designer to improve the look of the ebook.

Good Luck.

They more targeted you are the better the response will be. Targeting women is a good idea if the books are aimed at mostly women. I see you have books about both. Did you know women make up 80-85% of the buyer market on the internet! From my experience, I have several websites that are not in my "real Name" and I specailize in the niche of weight loss due to myself being a personal trainer. When I target women and their needs I get a huge response than if I did men and weight loss. I don't know alot about your niche, but research would be a good thing to do. I would look at all your competition and see what they are targeting. Test ads or headlines through adwords if you can or small offline newspaper marketing. Or even twitter tweets. If you have a large following, I test a lot of headlines in tweets. Seems to work great for me. But all in all...I would definately add some human pictures on it and get that warm, relationship feeling when someone comes to the page.

Also real quick before I go...I would test your conversion after you generate more traffic first. Marketing your site is key. YOu have to think of site as a billboard in the middle of the dessert! You need to get cars driving by to see you and take action if you know what I mean.

Well I am myself a web designer and your site looks dull and flat.
Hire a designer to redesign it with clear call to action since its a sales page.
Take care of SEO and internet marketing after its designed.

Thnx
TC

with your website i can't get much thing from there which do not convince me to get more news from your site. No strong call to action and content is not enough .

I think you need to redesign it. It looks terrible, just improvements will not help

A good start. Try to find a successful page on a similar topic and use that as a guide. Step 1 in my opinion would be to change the top font - looks like WordArt in Microsoft word 1998 or something

Members,kindly offer me some suggestions on how to improve my site below.My main business activity is event planning,cakes baking and meat supplies with FREE delivery within Nairobi,Kenya.
Thanks

It looks good, as it is on the white BG, but to my opinion it lacks use of colors. If the colors are used properly, the design will really look good.

Things to Be Improved
+ Make a Nice Header {It's too basic}
+ Put Some Nice Background {Try Some Gradients}
+ Hire a Web Designer to Make it Look More Professional or Make it on Wordpress and Choose a Suitable Theme.


Hope it Helps.