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Pro-thinpiration Design Review

by icemusike
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Hey Warriors
Long time reader first time posting

My Clickbank Product has been launched finaly.

I managed to setup my salepage and affiliate page

Please rereview and give sugestions regarding content design anything.

pro-thinspiration.com Pro-Thinspiration - Pro Ana Tips to Lose Weight The Right Way
pro-thinspiration.com/affiliates/affiliates.html

Coded and designed by me from 0!

Any sugestions are welcome! i am planing to get a salesvideo there in front but cant find a place to buy a salevideo for my site. any sugestions regarding this problem are welcome as well

I am doing well with the product affiliates earning huge! 75% commisions with 0 refunds so far!


You might as well profit from this niche and cash in big $$! low competition high volume of traffic in this niche

All the best,
Adrian
#design #prothinpiration #review
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    • Profile picture of the author martinkr
      Hey

      Two things I noticed immediately:

      1) Create some whitespace around the picture. At the moment the shadow is touching the text and it does not look professional (to my pixel-perfectionist eye at least ). Add about 10 pixel gap there. Alternatively you can try removing the shadow. Is that you on the picture there? Seems like a stock photo of a model, but perhaps you actually are one

      2) Consider using another handwritten font in the bullets. At the moment the text is barely readable.

      Another thing sort of bothers me is that you have around ten different text styles. It's not that bad but generally considered bad design. In your case (the girly theme) I may actually work though.

      I like your buy buttons a lot. Saved them for future (th)inspiration

      Also the before/after pictures were really something. Seems like a very good product.

      Cheers!
      Martin
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