Honest Opinion: My Landing Page for Google Adword Campaign

by james96

Posted: 13 years ago 9 replies

WEB DESIGN

Hi Warriors,

I just concluded the design of the landing page I wish to use for my google adword campaign. Kindly preview the site and give your honest opinion on the usability and how prospective customers will view it and be converted.

The page is this Mobile Exploit: The Ultimate Guide To Profitable Mobile Marketing!

Thank you a bunch!

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james96 13 years ago

Still waiting for your opinions please. Your opinions matter to me.
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- Simon Phillips 13 years ago
  
  The first point I would make, TBH, is that the page you link to is not very mobile friendly due to it's width! Might be an idea to sort that considering the subject matter
  
  It is worth noting however that the primary page at w w w . mobileexploit . com IS mobile friendly!
  
  (tested on a Nokia N900 in landscape and portrait)
  
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  John Hocking 13 years ago
  
  I recommend you watch this video.
  7 deadly sins of landing page design - Inside AdWords
  
  Overall, I don't think you bullet points are going to push people into a direct sale.
  
  You would do better with offering a free report or sample chapter in return for capturing the email so you can follow up with them later.
  
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  BubbaJay 13 years ago
  
  Just my opinions...
  
  All the different fonts and bullet styles - too much.
  
  The guarantee should be down by the price
  
  Remove the bobbing arrow adn maybe put the price next the the add to cart or something, it seems out of place where it is.
  
  The testimonials is again a different font and the spacing is off.
  
  I like the clors and layout, just needs some polishing.
  
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  james96 13 years ago
  
  Thank you so much for your opinions. I really appreciate. I am truly working on the site based on your observations.
  
  Thanks
  
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  james96 13 years ago
  
  Hi,
  
  Following your useful observations, below is a new landing page. More opinions please!
  
  Mobile Exploit: Strategies To Profitable Mobile Marketing
  
  Thanks
  
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  baronet 13 years ago
  
  Hi,
  
  I like it loads very quickly and there is not too much information like alot of sites out there.
  I'm not an expert but nice work :-)
  
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Viramara 13 years ago

nice design....but your words are more compelling for a squeeze page instead a sales letter. I used to think it's a squeeze page until I saw the $27 tag
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- james96 13 years ago
  
  Thank you friends for the positive comments. I am going straight ahead to launch my adwords campaign.
  
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Honest Opinion: My Landing Page for Google Adword Campaign

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