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My Mobile website

by Bovie
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Hello everyone.

Im new to the world of IM, and im really enjoying making my website and filling it with information related to my niche.

I have never made a website or done anything like this before so im a real NooB. But i'm enjoying it.

Could someone kind enough please have a quick look over my site and let me know what they think.. (in sig)

You can be harsh as you like, If your not harsh with my work.. how am i suppsed to learn?

Thank you.

P.s Its made to look good on a mobile, so it is slightly smaller on a laptop. And its only been hosted for a week or so.

Thank you... Again.
#mobile #website
  • Profile picture of the author Bovie
    I had a hit from google today.. Page 4 near the bottom, i thought most people didn't look past page 2?

    Didn't convert though..
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    • Profile picture of the author wcardinal
      I would limit your little link boxes to 4 so that they take up less space. Also - you might want to change the font color to white - theyre kinda hard to read.
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      • Profile picture of the author Bovie
        Originally Posted by wcardinal View Post

        I would limit your little link boxes to 4 so that they take up less space. Also - you might want to change the font color to white - theyre kinda hard to read.
        Thank you, I have made them smaller, removed news so they appear on one line...

        What do you mean by font color, on the actual links themselves? Or my content?

        Ill put news on the bottom of my pages relating to the news in the category they are about.
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  • Profile picture of the author BubbaJay
    Not a fan of the background. I'd make the buttons 1 row - so either smaller, or remove 2 like wcardinal mentioned. Maybe get a game of your own on here...something interractive.
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    • Profile picture of the author rustythayer2
      I think the color combination which you used in your website is not matched, try some different combiantion, otherwise rest of the things are good.
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      • Profile picture of the author jordonmartell
        Originally Posted by rustythayer2 View Post

        I think the color combination which you used in your website is not matched, try some different combiantion, otherwise rest of the things are good.
        I do agree to him
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        • Profile picture of the author amylv
          look and feel can be improved in the user point of view.
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          • Profile picture of the author Bovie
            Originally Posted by amylv View Post

            look and feel can be improved in the user point of view.
            Could you expand on this. I'm trying to make it as good as possible for people who come to this site via their mobile phone.

            Thank you.
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  • Profile picture of the author jasjotbains
    If you could just widen the center part a little,and make the text a little bigger,it would look much more appealing Plus if you can use Adsense on it,do so
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    • Profile picture of the author Bovie
      Originally Posted by rustythayer2 View Post

      I think the color combination which you used in your website is not matched, try some different combiantion, otherwise rest of the things are good.
      I went for red as this according to research attracts gamblers.. Like the red lights of a casino.

      I chose black text as it easy to read against my White background.

      I'm changing the background as this maybe where the issue was being blue and floral - which has nothing to do with gambling!

      Originally Posted by jasjotbains View Post

      If you could just widen the center part a little,and make the text a little bigger,it would look much more appealing Plus if you can use Adsense on it,do so
      I have made it 480px due to this being one of the average screen resolution of a mobile phone, I have tested it on.. iPad, iPod, iPhone 3&4, nokias, a old wap phone and a few blackberrys and it seems good. The only obvious issue is on a desktop. So I may have to add a desktop detection that goes to a larger theme.

      Thank you.
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  • Profile picture of the author Bovie
    I have changed the suggested items... Would be great to hear any more criticism.

    Thank you.
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  • Profile picture of the author focused
    The red borders on either side of the sales copy are distracting.
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