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suggestion for block of words

by nate45
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hey, i designed this infographics would like suggestion for the block of words right below. any ideas to perk up those words?

#block #suggestion #words
  • Profile picture of the author barbotoole
    Sure, Nate. Thanks for asking!

    First - I'm not sure what the "block of words" is supposed to accomplish. I can't tell whether you want people to agree with the "yes" or "no" columns. (I'm going to assume you want "yes.")

    In the "yes" column there are two phrases that sound like quotes, "We didn't notice.." so it would help if you listed those above the blocks of words as "yes" quotes, or changed them from having pronouns, "We," and "me" so that they match the other statements.

    Second - this list is way too long for an ad. Focus on the top 6. Make them larger, easier to read.

    Can you add the shortest of the "yes's" at the very last? Don't have the opposites in blue for these:

    Don't have to stand in line. Costs $29. Pretty. No scroll bars. Done.
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