Please review my design

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Hi all
Please I'd like you to review my new site Timesparks - Which was the best minute of your life?
The idea of the site that allows you to buy a moment for yourself or for someone else and keep it on the site. Once you have a moment ready you can put a favorite picture, video or text and title it as you wish.
Please tell me about everything. Where can I advertise my site and how to put it in good implementation.

I'll put for you here 3 Gifts Codes . You can add your photo or link and use this gift code to purchase the moment.

1. 8fbcf1d6faeac661da0071b0476da1a0
2. 0622af6ca7bfee3de68bd16c1fbebc63
3. f37f849ea57598ba2d9003c25448af9f
#review #site
  • Profile picture of the author Riggs
    I don't have time right now to look over it entirely, but I have to say great job on the design. That's probably the single most graphically appealing website I've seen a Warrior own (so far). Given the logic of the content, I'd assume targeting the audience of social media sites would be your best bet.

    Great site. Best of luck!
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  • Profile picture of the author Shweta Naik
    Hi,
    You can add up more title in top favorite Moments like Best moment with family or you Love.
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  • Profile picture of the author andy25i
    Originally Posted by IMMaster View Post

    Hi all
    Please I'd like you to review my new site Timesparks - Which was the best minute of your life?
    The idea of the site that allows you to buy a moment for yourself or for someone else and keep it on the site. Once you have a moment ready you can put a favorite picture, video or text and title it as you wish.
    Please tell me about everything. Where can I advertise my site and how to put it in good implementation.

    I really appreciate your work. Great job. I think You just need a little more addition to tittle and try to put some text contents too. Tittle matters a lot as it helps you rank higher. Try to take some of recommendation from SEO personals too. Ranking higher will give you more and more users.
    All the best.
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  • Profile picture of the author MissPatty
    Hello IMMaster,

    It is true that your website looks great It really makes a visitor want to stay and look for more (at least for me!)

    I believe the main issue with the way you present your website is right from your definition. You say that "the site allows you to buy a moment for yourself or for someone else."

    Sorry but... WHO buys "moments" of their lives? Nobody wants to hear that they have to "purchase" something that they consider so precious, so full of emotions.

    What I mean here is - you should probably hide the "buy" button and turn it into a link title that is closer to "save the date". Even if eventually it's the exact same page, people don't want to know that they have to "purchase" their favorite life moments, they want to know that they can "memorize" it.

    I believe the basic of your website is not here. Despite its beautiful graphics, it seems that you are still confused about or do not really know how to talk to your ideal visitor.

    From what I see, your ideal visitor is:
    a) someone who cares for himself and want to showcase his personal life story on your website
    b) someone who cares for a loved one (girlfriend, friend or family) and want to showcase this person's personal life story on your website
    c) someone who cares for BOTH a loved one and himself and want to showcase BOTH the loved one's AND his own personal life story on your website

    What you are doing wrong, in my opinion:
    1. You are pushing forward the fact that they have to "buy" this moment... I do see what you mean and it's perfectly clear from a commercial point of view. Now, you are selling something that is emotional and you must add emotion to your presentation.
    2. You are assuming that people who want to buy moments for themselves will be talking about themselves (that's what I get from your "15 min of fame" aregument on the "vision" page.) I suspect that a large percentage of people going to your site will go for friends or for both friends and themselves... Again, nobody likes to say "I had to pay to be showcased." It sounds much cooler and natural to say "Hey me and my friend got featured on... I purchased it as a gift cause he got his degree/good grades", etc. Or the person will ONLY buy for the loved one.
    2.a. to make sure that what I say makes sense, you should have a "poll" temporarily on your website and ask people why they are visiting your website: to showcase themselves, their friends or both? the result of the poll should influence your sales copy... Remember, you should put a website with the idea of SERVING PEOPLE first, not to make money! People feel this kind of stuff and are reluctant to join. They don't want to "buy" anything on internet, they want to "feel" things: that they are part of something, etc.
    2b. so instead of "buy a moment" it would be "save a moment" or something like that.
    2c. do not be too hard on the "15 min of fame" feeling - try to rather talk to their inner desire to share a special moment with fellow internet users (the concept is that it should not be "bragging" but more like "sharing")
    3. You were asking about promotion > I believe you should advertise for free or premium on any forum and website that is talking about social media. You have a new kind of social media in your hands, this is GOLDEN! Do not say that it's one more teenager-oriented bragging type of website. Make it sound like it's the LATEST and BIGGEST website to SHARE proudest moments in people's lives and SHOWCASE them to the REST OF THE WORLD. See the difference in the purpose? "buy a moment" and "upload, showcase and share your most emotional moment with the rest of the world" sound utterly different.
    4. Try to get reviews from authority websites and blogs who are always on the look for such brand new websites, to see if they work or not. Though you may want to run a one-to-three week specials, aka free membership. You want to have tons of people showcased at least on the first page before pretending you can charge 1$ per order. If nobody is here first, you can bet nobody will want to join.
    4a. Make sure the free memberships that people get gain you some visibility on social networks such as Twitter or Facebook (tell people it's free because you want mass promotion but otherwise it would cost them a minimum of 10 bucks per 10 moments or something.)

    Here, I gave you ALL the thoughts that I had - honestly it's more than a "review" of your website and it's more like marketing because when I design websites for clients, I believe the visitor should be the main basics for any decision related to the website.

    I sincerely hope you make something great out of this - the concept is neat, the design is kick-ass, you just need to sign up tons of people and get reviewed on authority blog and you may well be on your way to be the next big social network website

    If you need help with anything, please do not hesitate to contact me.

    To your success!

    - Patty
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  • Profile picture of the author jimmy69
    Great work, I love pink.
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  • Profile picture of the author Azarna
    I didn't really understand exactly what I would be buying, and why.
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  • Profile picture of the author Brillig
    The design is very well done. I'm not sure if I wouldn't have chosen a darker color for some of the copy. It comes across slightly washed out looking, especially in the pink-on-white and white-on-pink text. (Edit: even more so in the yellow on white in the ad at the top.)

    But that's just a tiny constructive suggestion. Overall it's very nicely done.
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  • Great work with the design, clean and modern. My only recommendation is about the pink color unless you're targeting girls. Good luck!
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