Please review my website

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I have just recently finished building my 1st website.

(click on my signature to reach my website)

I appreciate any and all feedback. My goal is to provide a site where visitors can go through and look at multiple "make money online products" and read a review of the programs. Im trying to make a page that converts but that at the same time is informative and useful to the viewer. You will notice that I have created a page that has listed free ebooks that I found that are allowed to be given away.

Do you all like the idea of this? is my page easy to navigate and helpful to users? anything I should add or take away? all advice is appreciated
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  • Good design. But dont you think the color will become so hard for your visitor's eyes? Its my suggestion that use some light color.
    thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author autumnsmith
    Please take time in improving your site especially the home page. When I highlight it, I could see that the "Click Here" link is hidden ( font color is the same as background color). Also, you may change the page name of your webpages - instead of page2.html/page3.html rename it with the link name. There might be interested visitors who would like to know more about your offered service so try to add contact page. The structure is good but you could still improve it.
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  • Profile picture of the author JSanti7
    Nice, simple and not cluttered. However, I think the header is too simple. Maybe you need to work on it a little.
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  • Profile picture of the author Jac0b
    Interesting design but I think it's very simple...
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  • Profile picture of the author smithpaul
    I have seen your website designing, its so nice and simple. My opinion is that it will require change the template. But i like site very much.
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    • Profile picture of the author john1818
      Originally Posted by eprofit13 View Post

      Great design. But dont you think the color will become so hard for your visitor's eyes? Its my suggestion that use some light color.

      Cheers'
      Akshay
      It's so obvious that you just copied someone else's post.

      Originally Posted by crgargan View Post

      I have just recently finished building my 1st website.

      (click on my signature to reach my website)

      I appreciate any and all feedback. My goal is to provide a site where visitors can go through and look at multiple "make money online products" and read a review of the programs. Im trying to make a page that converts but that at the same time is informative and useful to the viewer. You will notice that I have created a page that has listed free ebooks that I found that are allowed to be given away.

      Do you all like the idea of this? is my page easy to navigate and helpful to users? anything I should add or take away? all advice is appreciated
      Hi, the design is good though i personally think "Green" color will not be suitable for the type of site. It was too bright for my eyes. I would rather choose a different color that will somehow be attractive yet cool to the eyes. Like color blue with white? or black and red, something like that.
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  • Profile picture of the author ezbiz
    A few things you should consider fixing..

    1. You do not have a www redirect..(that's treated as duplicate content)
    2. You have No site map or thru robots.txt
    3. Add Google analytic (this will not effect anything, just helps to track)
    4. Home title tag contains only 1 word "Home" (consider keywords)
    5. You do not have an H1 tag.. (consider tagging a keyword)
    6. No 404 error page.. (add to .htaccess linking to one of your pages to keep link juice)

    Looks good, I have to agree with others here to maybe add color to background.
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  • Profile picture of the author mikedex
    Need to work more on website homepage. Images are not matched basing on website requirements. Color is average not good.
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    • Profile picture of the author Azarna
      If it is not a silly question, how are you qualified to be offering advice and information on making money online if this is your very first website?
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      • Profile picture of the author crgargan
        Originally Posted by Azarna View Post

        If it is not a silly question, how are you qualified to be offering advice and information on making money online if this is your very first website?
        This is my first website I have personally built. Most of the money I have made from my affiliate marketing campaigns were from direct linking and I knew that building a website would increase my sales but I understand what you were thinkning
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  • Profile picture of the author Karen Barr
    I'll be brutally honest; the layout is a mess.

    You have a square header and footer bracketing a rounded content section, which just looks bizarre. The top menu navigation tabs don't look aligned properly and don't fit the style of the page. Under the picture of the car you have a rounded corner across the content - looks like the original content template was only intended to cover about 600 pixels.

    You've then got a square banner going across the bottom, overlapping the content, which looks bizarre.

    Why does the header say "TeebSoftware"??

    Speaking of the content, the images of cars, beaches etc just turn me right off and would immediately make me think "scam".

    My strong recommendation would be to install Wordpress and start over with a decent theme. If you're looking for some affordable help, drop me a PM.
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  • Profile picture of the author pixeldreamer
    Firstly I'd like to say well done on creating your first website.

    I can only comment on the design side of things and if I'm honest, it really doesn't flow very well for me.
    The header and footer doesn't fit well with the content section as they are different sizes.
    I don't understand why the title of your site is different to the url..is there a reason for that?

    I would suggest changing the template to something that is more visually appealing and soften the colour tones. At the moment, the design for me appears to be a little outdated. I would try adding some more modern, web 3.0 looking graphics.

    All the best with it and keep going.
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  • Profile picture of the author keven brown
    There are a lot of empty spaces on right and left side. Plus domain is too long and difficult to remember.
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  • The header is overhanging past the content area. Was that intentional?
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