Please review my site

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Hello everybody from Italy, first time in this wonderful forum.
I need some critique to my website in signature to improve it.
Thanks in advance, Fabio
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  • Profile picture of the author mgreener
    Hi Fabio,

    Change the font in the Header to something bigger, bolder. Arial Black or Impact for example.

    On the sidebar, put in a button rather than a text link for "modulo per consulenza gratuita" as there is so much text and blue that it becomes overwhelming. Break it up a bit with an image based button.
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  • Profile picture of the author fredrikrob
    I can understand the language in your web page but the overall theme is good and it's simple and catchy. As for me i like you to use the short keyword in the anchor text because it's good for the SEO perspective.
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  • Profile picture of the author brazda22
    Simpe design, but do something with picture frames make it more round, or make some other frame and place some red cross icon for modulo per consulenza gratuita and place that text under the icon (that's an idea). Otherwise, it serves the purpose although I think you will advance to the next level and make it more attractive.
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  • Profile picture of the author SamLaken
    Overall I like it so I'm just nit picking. Change the font in the headers and maybe make the links in the header slightly larger too.
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  • I suggest that you add content to your site. One main page with a general content about what you do will be helpful to your visitors to understand what you do.
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  • Profile picture of the author SupporTech
    I think you write up some contents for your website, the design is quite just fine, but I'm not quite used to it cuz guys here in the office has higher standards for design and vectors of website's so i'm quite used to high quality websites, but It's good. Try to put some header Banners in HOME page, change the header banners in the inner pages. Put up a Logo and TXT in H1 form and make it as the MAIN HEADER! of the website!Mix some colors for the design to suit ur eye needs so that you can enhance your style!
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  • Profile picture of the author Jac0b
    As for me your theme is very simple. Think about it.
    Also you need much more content.
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  • Profile picture of the author KingOfMusic
    *Simon Cowell Mode ON*

    Looks very boring, like I entered one of those unclaimed domain pages. Make it more unique to your niche, especially the pictures, not some random clouds, unless your company is about cloud technology. O_O
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    • Profile picture of the author SupporTech
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      '---I agree with him!
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    • Profile picture of the author simondach
      Originally Posted by KingOfMusic View Post

      *Simon Cowell Mode ON*

      Looks very boring, like I entered one of those unclaimed domain pages. Make it more unique to your niche, especially the pictures, not some random clouds, unless your company is about cloud technology. O_O
      KingOfMusic is on the f*cking money. Nice post dude.

      Here's My View

      I just translated your page from Italian into English to find out what it is about, because I couldn't easily tell from the layout and imagery. As such, here's what you need to do so people get it.

      1. Make your design match your pricetag.
      Right now, it looks amateur and cheap - and you're trying to sell what would seem to be a high cost service.

      You want your visitors to feel like they're dealing with a professional business that will take care of their health and safety. Your current web design doesn't say "I'm will take care of you!", it says "Free Theme!". A successful business doesn't skimp on first impressions.

      Here's a few ways you can really improve your design:
      • Change the cream to a flat white
      • Change the heading font from the cartoon style font to a clean sans-serif typeface
      • Bump your search bar down about 8px

      2. Make Your Site Readable
      Even after translating your site, it feels like I'm running into the Great Wall of Paragraphs. Take the time to simplify your content, include more relevant imagery and make the content more accessible.

      You want people to read your site and then request a consultation - make it as hassle free for them as possible.

      3. Tell The Visitor What To Do
      The call to action you're using is great - but it isn't differentiated from every other link on your website.

      If this is the number one thing you want a visitor to do, then make it clear.

      You can do this by creating a small button using photoshop or GIMP (free), or even the CSS Button Generator (google it).

      Make these small changes, and you'll see a massive improvement.
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    • Profile picture of the author Blogger Newbie
      Originally Posted by KingOfMusic View Post

      *Simon Cowell Mode ON*

      Looks very boring, like I entered one of those unclaimed domain pages. Make it more unique to your niche, especially the pictures, not some random clouds, unless your company is about cloud technology. O_O
      Hahaha agreedwith u
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  • Profile picture of the author autumnsmith
    I do agree on some comments above, you will need to have your official pictures to be placed on your banner. Also, to make it more professional you may want to place your official logo. Also, in your "contact us" page, you may want to provide a comprehensive contact information of the company and place the form below it. So, people could easily and immediately reach you. Hope these things help. Good luck!
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    • Profile picture of the author KayMaxim
      Originally Posted by autumnsmith View Post

      I do agree on some comments above, you will need to have your official pictures to be placed on your banner. Also, to make it more professional you may want to place your official logo. Also, in your "contact us" page, you may want to provide a comprehensive contact information of the company and place the form below it. So, people could easily and immediately reach you. Hope these things help. Good luck!
      As always Autumn, you give good feedback. Specific and helpful.
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  • Profile picture of the author ricky pounting
    please make your site more easy to use at least your content should be good and of course try a bigger header...........
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  • Profile picture of the author mikedex
    Simple website. Bottom part are blank. Need to add few more things on that.
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  • Profile picture of the author Fabio89
    Many thanks for your precious reviews. Special thanks to Simondach for his great review. Following your suggestions and as many of you understood, website has nothing to do with clouds so I've changed the header, background color now is simply white and added some information in English for international visitors. Next step will be to add more content. More reviews and critiques are always welcome.
    Thanks again for your wonderful help.
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  • Profile picture of the author hanakuza
    the website looks neat, but needs a little more graphics I think. looks a little plain and dull
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  • Profile picture of the author rasel786
    I think your design is simple but cool.
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  • Profile picture of the author sumonrahman
    Thanks for the post is there any chances out of Itly?
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  • Profile picture of the author amritrr
    Nice. It seems like this is a static website though you are using it like a blog. It would be better if you use Blogger or Wordpress perhaps. Otherwise, it looks nice.
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