hey guys i just finished my site tell me what you think

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I have just launched my site, I am looking for someone to critique my site..

thanks

worldwebguys
#finished #guys #hey #site
  • Profile picture of the author Michael Meaney
    You forgot to add the suffix...

    If it's worldwebguys.com - very impressive.
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  • Profile picture of the author Rankx
    I would agree with the above poster if that is your site. However, there is one huge problem. I didn't do it for you
    This site would be splendid to add to my portfolio. If only I did it. grrrrr
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  • Profile picture of the author nethead01
    Im thinking about doing a service thread but i never wrote a sales page before! I wouldn't know where to start lol
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  • Profile picture of the author aeroturner
    Awesome dude !! Great work..Ur site looks cool and attractive !!
    Keep rocking
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  • Profile picture of the author Ayshaj
    nice work... great....
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  • Profile picture of the author Trivium
    A very nicely done site. Well done! One small criticism though - the "Call Today" graphic doesn't look very nice, nor does it fit with the site. The font is spindly and faint, and does not attract attention to itself (save that gained from it completely clashing with the site). A more bold, 'rounded' style of font would suit the page much better.

    Also, other than the main page, the rest of them appear to be a bit bland, and largely just text-based with little or no complementing images. I feel your site could really benefit from some work on those other pages too.

    Other than that, I have no complaints
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  • Profile picture of the author janni321
    Website is perfectly designed. I must say great work.
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  • Profile picture of the author annymorrie
    Hey you did great work.. i really appreciate you go ahead dude.
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  • Profile picture of the author nethead01
    Ok know the other design is finished.. which one out of the two do you think I should use.. given that I fix the number thing on the first one and some small things you guys mention.

    The number thing I was really in a hurry and I also think is ugly and needs to be gone.. wait im going to just change it now.. im in the Christmas spirit I think something for Christmas should go there.

    tell me which one is better

    http://worldwebguys.com/designs.jpg < this is number 2 design I need help choosing between this and index page
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  • Profile picture of the author TolyZ
    I like the first one Great job!
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    • Profile picture of the author DGFletcher
      Depending on your advertising, you'll probably be fine on this. If somebody clicks on a link that says 'click here for website design companies', that'll be fine. Somebody dropping into it out of nowhere (like here!) I wasn't sure what the site did. That will probably not be a huge problem, but then again, something to look into. "Our services" was nearly below the fold on mine, and I'm on Chrome with just the address bar and tabs on top.
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  • Profile picture of the author zaco
    woooooooow! this is really professional! nicely designed! I sent you a PM to see if you can design my website
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  • Profile picture of the author JHONYY1
    I saw your web site.
    Your site looks cool and designed very well.
    You did a great job dude.
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    • Profile picture of the author Azarna
      It is a generally smart and very professional looking siite, well done :-)

      One issue I did have was the 'About Us' -

      "World Web Guys is founded by a 24 yr. old guy who had a passion for computers and the way the internet works. Later he begin studying the internet and learning how to design and develop websites."

      Oh, it is was founded by a guy. Some guy. He has no name. No identity. Sounds suspect to me.

      About Us should surely be, well, about who you are. I think this is a really important page as it is where the potential customer can see that you are a human, real, someone they can relate to and trust. Not just some 'guy'.

      You have put your business address on (which is great for trust!!!) but could this 'guy' not have a first name too?
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      • Profile picture of the author nethead01
        Originally Posted by Azarna View Post

        It is a generally smart and very professional looking siite, well done :-)

        One issue I did have was the 'About Us' -

        "World Web Guys is founded by a 24 yr. old guy who had a passion for computers and the way the internet works. Later he begin studying the internet and learning how to design and develop websites."

        Oh, it is was founded by a guy. Some guy. He has no name. No identity. Sounds suspect to me.

        About Us should surely be, well, about who you are. I think this is a really important page as it is where the potential customer can see that you are a human, real, someone they can relate to and trust. Not just some 'guy'.

        You have put your business address on (which is great for trust!!!) but could this 'guy' not have a first name too?
        I really appreciate that feedback.. Im not much of a writer at all! I always wondered what people thought about that page. Im going to make changes right way .

        Again thanks!
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  • Profile picture of the author Terry M
    Looks nice. I would add more to the "Why Us" page, maybe some testimonies, etc. Otherwise nice.
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