Please review my website

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hello everyone i had such great info from the warrior members last time i posted a site for review im anxious to see what great idea you all have for my new game site i just build

the url is Games 4 Gift Cards

Thanks for your input
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  • Profile picture of the author stevet563
    Wow! Amazing site. Good job. How is it doing? Do you have an affiliate program for referrals?
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  • Profile picture of the author stevet563
    Oh one more thing I didn't see is a lead capture box. A lot of times people don't buy or subscribe the first time around. Give away a free game guide or something in exchange for a name and email address so you can follow up later. Also include links to some game related clickbank products and do some absence advertising as well. You could also sell ad space if you're getting any decent traffic.
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  • Profile picture of the author kanadaka
    Looks nice. It reminds me of zynga games. How is it working for you?
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  • Profile picture of the author freak7
    It's looking good, i love white background sites. Good luck to you.
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  • Profile picture of the author julianna
    Best of Luck to you with your new site. Very creative!
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  • Profile picture of the author sandebdavid
    Really impressive. I liked the Clever Christmas Fairy. I am still in the x-mas mood
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  • Profile picture of the author nole
    It is a very nice clean website. Good Job!
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  • Profile picture of the author shantanu
    Gud website, takes much time for opening in slow net connection and try to use HD images now they are available but in case gud work bro
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  • the site is really Cool

    Pls take care on Meta tags section.
    Description meta tag is too short.(This tag contain 34 characters. This is too short for 'robot friendly' description)
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  • Profile picture of the author chansgrose
    I like the site looks like you put a good amount of time into it!
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    • Profile picture of the author tahoecale
      Originally Posted by Azarna View Post

      Really attractive site! Nice and welcoming. Love it.
      Originally Posted by sandebdavid View Post

      Really impressive. I liked the Clever Christmas Fairy. I am still in the x-mas mood
      Originally Posted by nole View Post

      It is a very nice clean website. Good Job!
      Originally Posted by BenLexi View Post

      Good Job..nice job
      Originally Posted by trexpro View Post

      I like the site looks like you put a good amount of time into it!

      Wow! thanks for all the great comments!
      Also if anyone has any suggestions please let me know
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  • Profile picture of the author Trivium
    On the whole, the site is quite well done. However, there are some points that I feel might need addressing.

    Firstly, the Grand Opening banner looks a bit tacky and cliche, and doesn't fit very well the the underlying site design and colour scheme. I'd suggest finding a graphic that fits the site a bit better.

    The header logo also looks quite simple, and doesn't really leave much of an impression. And the header background is just terrible - it really does not fit at all. I would strongly suggest either changing the colour, or making it white. Also, I think you should center the logo in the free space available - with it left aligned, it just leaves a big gap in the center, and its positioning doesn't attract as much attention as it should. It almost looks like its just been brushed to the side. Also, with the slogan, I'd suggest re-wording it slightly, to say "... exchange points for free gift cards" (changes underlined).

    Other than that, looks quite good
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    • Profile picture of the author tahoecale
      Originally Posted by Trivium View Post

      On the whole, the site is quite well done. However, there are some points that I feel might need addressing.

      Firstly, the Grand Opening banner looks a bit tacky and cliche, and doesn't fit very well the the underlying site design and colour scheme. I'd suggest finding a graphic that fits the site a bit better.

      The header logo also looks quite simple, and doesn't really leave much of an impression. And the header background is just terrible - it really does not fit at all. I would strongly suggest either changing the colour, or making it white. Also, I think you should center the logo in the free space available - with it left aligned, it just leaves a big gap in the center, and its positioning doesn't attract as much attention as it should. It almost looks like its just been brushed to the side. Also, with the slogan, I'd suggest re-wording it slightly, to say "... exchange points for free gift cards" (changes underlined).

      Other than that, looks quite good


      Im trying to find a designer for the logo i know it needs some work...
      what would you suggest on the background for the header?
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  • Profile picture of the author madyguru
    Its a simple and good looking site that you have
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  • Profile picture of the author JeremiahSay
    Nice creative site you have over there, hope you are making nice profit with it

    May God bless you,
    Jeremiah
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  • Profile picture of the author violaf
    very good job, i will only fix the menu header. this is my personal idea. I do not like the way of some part of the menu goes under....Rhythm | Shooting | Other | Strategy

    but other than that good job
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  • Profile picture of the author bryansmith1129
    Hello, very well design and it looks awesome.
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  • Profile picture of the author Trivium
    For the header background, I'd suggest a much lighter background, something like a sky blue, or equivalent for whatever other colour you choose. The main issue is just how dark and solid it is, and this contrasts with the use of light colouring and gradients throughout the rest of your site. Just play around with a few different colours and see what looks nice
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  • Profile picture of the author semutdesign
    Great site, but maybe try to move the search for menus. I rather have a single row menus rather tan two row menus.
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  • Profile picture of the author pastpapers1
    very attractive site
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  • Profile picture of the author pbrite
    As a "word and grammar" guy, I can help with your game's descriptive paragraphs. It might be nit-picky and I'm not sure if you really care, but some of your descriptors that I've read so far have bad comma splices. PM me or e-mail me if you want a couple of examples beyond these or we can make a deal:

    This is a room puzzle escape game,you trapped in the room of your girl friend,you must find some useful hidden objects and use them to combined to escape the room.

    Maybe try this instead?

    You're trapped in your girlfriend's bedroom! Look for some useful hidden objects and combine them to escape before her old man finds you!

    Another one:

    "Exchange point into free gift cards" should be "exchange points"

    Or:
    Drive your monster truck throught the Grand Canyon, don't let anything to stop you. Win races to get more score, medals. Buy new monster trucks. Upgrade your car and get ultimate upgrades. You can be awarded by 16 achievements.

    Should be

    Drive your monster truck through the Grand Canyon and don't let anything stop you!
    Win races to get higher scores, earn new medals and buy better monster trucks with bigger and badder upgrades.
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