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11 years ago

First of all, the "Premium Exclusive Website Design Leads" text on the header banner is slightly difficult to read on that background - the white text just doesn't stand out very well. Same goes with the bold blue header text - especially where it overlaps the people in suits - it just doesn't contrast enough with the background.

Also, I'm not sure about your choice of page background too - though I'm not sure whether it would look better lighter or darker, given the layout of your page. Though this is not a major concern.

Other than that, the site looks quite good.

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Absolute Logo

11 years ago

Hi! I don't think its a bad website, It does however look a little boring and cheap. You could fix that up no problem by adding a few graphics here and there! It also looks like your missing your suite number in your address

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dericks3

11 years ago

Thanks guys

Let me play around with the colors a bit maybe that will fix it up.
And its meant to be a lead generation site,with the focus on a call to action not a full on website,so not sure about the boring and cheap comment lol.

As long as they get the message loud and clear is what I am looking for.

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Absolute Logo

11 years ago

Originally Posted by dericks3

Thanks guys

Let me play around with the colors a bit maybe that will fix it up.
And its meant to be a lead generation site,with the focus on a call to action not a full on website,so not sure about the boring and cheap comment lol.

As long as they get the message loud and clear is what I am looking for.

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Yes, ultimately that is whats most important!

Good luck with your site!

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ritchierich

11 years ago

Hi Doug,

It's a start... The site looks flat. Perhaps add some gradients and change the banner image and logo (or lack there of

).

The text contrast on the page is low. I recommend changing the font color in your CSS to something like #777 or higher.

Good luck!

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olakh

11 years ago

You can change text color and put the images in this site.

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madyguru

11 years ago

Its good but it might be awesome

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shantanu

11 years ago

website is totally designed by u and how much they charged to u only according to that one can judge your website coz i am also having the business of web developmentsand according to me this website should not cost more than $ 65.

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vvsingh

11 years ago

Hmm. Looks good but it still there is a lot of room for improvement. Make it look more lively.
Your site's page rank is zero and only three pages indexed by Google. Make links and keep adding content if you want to optimize it for search engines.

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sandebdavid

11 years ago

That big space (margin/padding) before the banner really makes takes something from the banner. Close it up or curve the corners to match the bottom corners of the footer of that inner (main) page.

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dericks3

11 years ago

Some nice replies here guys I appreciate it,still playing around with it.

As you can see from the site am a phone lead generation guy not a website designer,so all this helps me greatly.

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shantanu

11 years ago

Originally Posted by dericks3

Some nice replies here guys I appreciate it,still playing around with it.

As you can see from the site am a phone lead generation guy not a website designer,so all this helps me greatly.

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Doug

All members are exactly right just try to increase your SEO ranking now and try to add more keywords. You are going great.

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semutdesign

11 years ago

I believe you header somehow make your website name kind blurry.

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dericks3 11 years ago

Yes thanks for that,I understand what you mean the letters are a bit fuzzy not sure how to fix that.
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dericks3

11 years ago

Thanks Shantanu,working on this as we speak

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versatile

11 years ago

Hi, I think you should change the white color of background and make footer of home page more informative.

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frenchsquared

11 years ago

I cant read the header text, you should build the text into the header graphic.
Graphic is just to mutch for text to sit over it.

Contact button is huge... kind of a turn off for me.

No meta data? Are you not interested in organic traffic?

I like the optin form, well done.

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dericks3 11 years ago

Thanks Frenchsquared will be trying different header designs to see what works best.

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for all the replies guys,much appreciated
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dericks3

11 years ago

Guys any idea how i can add this power point to my wp site?

Amazon Lead Team

Do i need to convert it to video 1st on Youtube or something?

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engecars

11 years ago

There's a lot of softwares to convert Powerpoint files to Flash extensions (FLV or SWF).
Just search "PPT to Flash" or "PPT to Flv". Good luck!

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dericks3 11 years ago

Thanks

Got the power point on the site but now have this annoying text at the top.

How do i lose that?

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engecars

11 years ago

yes I see. You are using a free version of the software. They always put something like ads or links. Try iSpring, instead. It comes with a free license for commercial purposes.
iSpring Free PowerPoint to Flash Converter | PowerPoint to Flash Free | Free PPT to SWF | Convert PowerPoint to Flash Free

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stevetucker30

11 years ago

Hello, the header text of your website is not looks properly. Please do some changes on that. Also use some different color in font because it is visible properly.

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Ibcontact

11 years ago

Good dude, its look professional. Good job .

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dericks3

11 years ago

Thanks Steve

Trying to figure out the font size on this still,will see if a color change helps

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FriedBassMedia

11 years ago

Greetings dericks3,

The page feels a little polluted to me.. "too much info"

For what it's worth, I would simplify the thing dramatically.

If you are going to use a vid, then use it! Convey the whole message in it. Pop that bad boy up in a litebox.

The text below right now pulls me away from the optin.

You will definitely need a pretty strong vid/presentation for this.

You're dealing with designers, they are a savvy bunch.. I feel you will be wasting your time trying to use fancy graphics and the like trying to impress them.

A good informative video will do wonders.

Maybe something like the mock-up I made below:
[please keep in mind that this is a quickie!

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I would also suggest you create a few pages and do some A/B split testing. Then do it some more..

It still surprises me at what subtle changes can increase OCR/CTR...

Regards,
FBM.

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profitableblog

11 years ago

The site looks fine today but I'll make a simple solution - grab $5 and get someone on fiverr to create a youtube video out of your ppt files. Post that video on Youtube for another way to rank your business on search engines and get rid of the "promotional" message on your current site video. As others have mentioned, get your site title, metas, and sales copy all set for whatever keyword phrases you are going to compete for.

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dericks3

11 years ago

Very nice Friedbass media,great graphic and great info as well.

Thanks alot

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Robby54

11 years ago

Its cool, really simple and straight to the point.

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dericks3 11 years ago

Thanks Robby

I took some of Fried b m advice and it seems to be more straight to the point now.
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FriedBassMedia

11 years ago

If you'd like, I can look at properly converting your PP presentation...

You will have to shoot me a PM with your email as I can't PM yet.

Regards,
FBM.

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dericks3 11 years ago

FBM

Check your pm.

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