pls review my site...

by globalwalyy

Posted: 13 years ago 16 replies

WEB DESIGN

hello warriors, i just crate a new blogger site.. CASH DOVE INFORMATION TECHNOLOGY
so pls review and tell me if i need to change anything..am going to use it for adsense

and secorndly any where i post the link it normally bring out the old registral name...i mea te person using it before....
pls what should i do...
i just register it yesterday

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chansgrose 13 years ago

The sites grammar and spelling is horrible.. something you should fix.
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Absolute Logo 13 years ago

I think the site's design is pretty decent! But like trexpro said, there are grammar and spelling errors everywhere! I do like the clean design however.
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- chansgrose 13 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by Absolute Logo
  
  I think the site's design is pretty decent! But like trexpro said, there are grammar and spelling errors everywhere! I do like the clean design however.
  
  It gave me more of a cluttered impression. But as far as colors go it's not anything eye burning or insane. So it has that going for it! I'm just giving my complete and honest opinion, no offense to the op.
  
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olakh 13 years ago

1)Color combination should be change.
2)Grammar mistakes should be accurate.
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RobertLindsey 13 years ago

I like the design
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globalwalyy 13 years ago

thank you all, i have just correct the error of grammer, can u pls check again and give reviews..
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globalwalyy 13 years ago

hello warriors, pls i just build a new blogger, which is LATEST INFO & TECHNOLOGY can you pls review it and tell me where i need to work on.... And is there any software i can use to drive traffic to my site...
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- Absolute Logo 13 years ago
  
  Hi, your website looks okay, however there are a lot of grammatical errors.
  
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- Nikolas 13 years ago
  
  The site looks ok. The only thing you need to check is the header where the text uses two lines without that being necessary.
  
  In your second question I don't think that a software can really help you get quality traffic. Read more on the forums on promotion techniques, there are many out there but you will need to get your hands dirty
  
  Good luck with your site
  
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- Trivium 13 years ago
  
  First of all, it would be a good idea to tidy up the grammar on your site - the lack or misuse of punctuation and the poor sentence structure makes it appear unprofessional and will likely deter viewers. Also, as mentioned, the header does not need to use two lines, and this just leaves a large area of whitespace. It might be worthwhile to invest in getting a nice header graphic for the site too - plain text headers just dont leave much of an impact.
  
  Another issue is the thumbnail images accompanying each blog post - these have not been cropped and are instead resized to fit in the thumbnail placeholder - this looks quite bad, and also appears unprofessional. I would strongly recommend at least taking the time to crop the images to the correct size beforehand, to avoid this issue.
  
  Lastly, the site at first glance looks very busy and cluttered. The overuse of text formatting in your posts just makes them look messy. Other than that, the choice of site template is nice, clean and simple, but I feel your content really hasn't done it justice.
  
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- AdvancedSamurai 13 years ago
  
  1. The site title and the domain are not even closely related.
  2. Badly writen articles.
  
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  Jenny30 13 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by AdvancedSamurai
  
  1. The site title and the domain are not even closely related.
  2. Badly writen articles.
  
  I am agreed, but looks better
  
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- globalwalyy 13 years ago
  
  ok thank you all i will try to make ammendment
  
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- globalwalyy 13 years ago
  
  Hllo warriors ,thanks for reviewing my site, and i have a little problem.. i add a banner to my site buy the banner didnt full the header pls any help check my site
  LATEST INFO & TECHNOLOGY
  
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Deadly Designs 13 years ago

Spelling and the way you format your words and sentences are not good.

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ritchierich 13 years ago

I would work on the color combinations. Those blue borders around content and sidebars, make them matte grey scale. It's too neon looking.
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