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My conversions suck... Why?

by frenchsquared
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Can you look at my site... Don't buy if you want a copy let me know. I will get you a better deal or give you a copy for a good review. I am not trying to make sales I need help with conversions.

What do you not like about this page?
What is stopping people from purchasing?

I think the video isnt good enough. I am looking for an affordable
place to get a new one made. I suck at sales. I'm a coder.

I want to get the conversions better on this theme in practice for the
new theme that is coming out in a month or so.

site = metamorphosistheme.com
#conversions
  • Profile picture of the author Istvan Horvath
    The guys in this forum: The Copywriting Forum gave me excellent advice with my very first squeeze page...

    Try them

    I am not an expert by any means but I have to agree: the video is far from being good... the sales copy, probably, needs some overhaul plus a better formatting...
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  • Profile picture of the author SoCalMarketing
    without a doubt the video needs to be redone. The site overall really needs a brighter look. If you look over the WSO section of the forum, there are some great marketers there that make/use awesome sales pages. I know because inevitably they sucker me into pulling out my credit card! even for stuff I don't really need.

    Looks like you have a good product.. I have purchased the genesis theme and thesis, have not really made use of either one of them much. How does yours differ from them?
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  • Profile picture of the author frenchsquared
    I have not used genesis. My theme is geared more for a beginner user then thesis.
    Less option, but a lot easier to use. Metamorphosis is very similar to Socrates.
    No header gallery... and a different look, but very similar.

    Wait till my new theme comes out. I will give away a few review copies.
    It will be better then any theme on the marking.
    The new theme has a new ui, that lets you change every aspect of the theme.
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