I think you should try a different approach, maybe do some research on other good sales page try to learn from them.

It is quite good and bright but u must use blue colour instead of red in the front with light blue not blood red it makes a cool impression and gives a positive sign.

I agree, get rid of the red for the headline. its scary.
Blue is well known to be an indicator of trust.

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ok, I changed the colors

regarding the different approach, could you point me to a example if possible
would be much appreciated

Jurrie