Review My website Please

by kepoyoh

Posted: 12 years ago 13 replies

WEB DESIGN

Hi guys, have read some online and learned about the wordpress enough to set my own hosting and site up.

autoblackzone.com

When the ground got finished design (Fairly) i tried to the make some money on the site atleast so i can use it to pay the hosting "For starters"

But i had no luck i have tried adsense but That did not do much,

Right now the site has around 100 visits each month (5 uniqe) 10-40 a day each.

can anybody help me why this site is difficult indexed in google ..
What there is an error on my site,,

need a lot of input from friends all,
thank you

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ascensionmedia 12 years ago

Looks good. Not sure if I like the red on grey background. Think orange would be better. Also, give it a better title tag.. A descriptive one Not just keywords
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Spock1 12 years ago

It looks well organized and not as yucky as most car web sites.

I'm not that into cars but the black background is strangely comforting, I wanted to click on the links but had no real reason to so I didn't but wanted to.

I like that there aren't moving commercials all over the place.
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JeremiahSay 12 years ago

Looks great.. I believe you are able to make some decent money with this website especially with the banners ads on the left and from google adsense..

Trying adding some affiliates that links to car related.. prolly you can even start a brand new page that sells car washing equipments from Amazon (example)..

Hope this help,
Jeremiah
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iqbal 12 years ago

looks nice
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aw1219 12 years ago

I really like it. I like the photos and the descriptions that go along with the make of each automobile. It looks clean, neat, and organised. I didn't see any prices.
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- Hils 12 years ago
  
  Well, it looks great. But who is the site for? To me it wasn't obvious - and it has to be obvious in the first few seconds otherwise your visitor will simply click to another site. So what I would do is write very clearly what the site is about at the top of the home page.
  
  As for getting indexed with Google, sounds like your pages need to be optimised for the search engines, such as placing keywords at the top and bottom of each page.
  
  Hope this helps!
  
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  webpeon 12 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by Hils
  
  Well, it looks great. But who is the site for? To me it wasn't obvious
  
  Agreed, site looks great, strange selection of colours but it actually works. Id just really look to capture the attention of visitors as soon as they hit your home page and currently theres nothing telling anyone what the sites about. I know it probably seems obvious but to new visitors it often isnt.
  
  also is this () a 3rd party plugin that helps with SEO, im not sure it does tbh, youd probably get more satisfaction and a better ranking if you read through some articles and wrote the meta seo code yourself
  
  good luck
  
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vjboc 12 years ago

Really impressive site. I like the images along with the detailed descriptions. Looks like you will do well with this site..
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Trivium 12 years ago

Overall, this is a very well presented site, especially compared to most car sites I've seen. But there are some small improvements you could make.

For starters, you need to make your navigation menu more visible. The black-on-dark-grey is borderline impossible to see, and I'm willing to bet most people don't even realise it's there.

Also, I'd suggest fixing up the grammar in your "About" page, as it doesn't read very well. And since many people have complained that the purpose of your site isn't immediately clear, it might be a good idea to include a one line summary on your homepage, perhaps just below or to the right of your header, just to make it clear that it is a car review site.

Other than that, you've done a great job. Good luck with your site
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saravanadreams 12 years ago

Looks Good, but expect something interactive design... then no motto/caption is there to express purpose of website)
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AdamMc 12 years ago

Your site looks really good, nice work! One thing I would do (purely out of personal taste) is make the navigation at the top more visible, I'd probably set its default colour to the same colour as the 'Go' text in the corner, i.e css hex value #929999

In terms of traffic your site is practically brand new and will naturally take some time to acquire trust in Google. Optimise for the right keywords and build links to your site and your traffic will increase over time.

p.s. I think your advertisement is in exactly the right place, it blends in with the page rather nicely
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cassiegetty 12 years ago

your website is perfect for the car lover visitors. the black color theme gives compliment to the small car images. good jb!
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nightshade877 Banned 12 years ago

really great work my friend. Wordpress is a powerful platform, and you displayed that perfectly here. Good job, and best of luck!
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