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Please Review my site for offline businesses

by Anoopchawla
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Hey there, I have made a site for giving services like web designing, seo, ppc etc to small businesses.

Here is the url --> TecBazaar

PS the site is not complete yet, I have to add a logo and create some content but I was so excited to get reviews that I couldn't wait.

Let me know what you think about the website design is it okay?
#businesses #offline #review #site
  • Profile picture of the author shermancox
    Broken image at the top

    phone number doesn't fit in the box.

    I don't know about the big picture of the lady taking up all of your real estate. Maybe shrink her and put some more of your sales copy up there...
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  • Profile picture of the author Sharyn Sheldon
    I'm sure you'll get plenty of feedback, but here are just a few things that stand out initially:

    - can't read the text on the right in the header (search box, phone number etc)
    - your text is too small in general
    - can't read your tagline (get custom website designed... (also needs to be bigger)
    - your 'goal' is about you, not the customer. It needs to focus on a problem that you are solving for customers. (make bigger too)

    Also, you list one of your services as SEO. There are still many people who don't know what that is. Or hosting, for that matter.

    You should indicate what the image slider is at the top. I'm assuming that those are images of other website you've designed, but you should say so.
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