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12 years ago

It sucks! I left the moment I saw the design, lol. To be honest, I thought it was GREAT! I was really impressed with the design and the video. Very easy to understand process. Great job!

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eva dora

12 years ago

i like the video!

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zoomsixx

12 years ago

On a scale of 1 to 10 I would give it a 7. Not great, but it gets the point across.

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sarakelly72 12 years ago

Originally Posted by zoomsixx

On a scale of 1 to 10 I would give it a 7. Not great, but it gets the point across.

i will give 9 points to your landing page design. gud one.
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Adme

12 years ago

Thanks all for the feedback. I think my biggest drawback is the coloring in regard to the niche and maybe the CTA size.

James you had me going, simply because I just came here from trying ********** and I got blasted by like 100 Fu's on my first post.

Chuggo. To start:
minimize the number of colors.
Use the 3 second rule = does the visitor know what it is
Think about how you can deliver instant clarity
Add another CTA at the bottom

I personally don't like long copy until I am warmed up. That's me.

Unfortunately I think the get rich program has been over-saturated and spoiled by many. Therefore I would concentrate on highlighting the one attribute you can demonstrate that differentiates you from the rest.

Hope that helps. Thanks guys

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petemcal

12 years ago

It's good apart from the fact there is no header banner.

I thought it looked a little incomplete with just the text "Dental Destinations HQ in Florida, USA. Toll Free line: (888) 536-2601 " where a header banner would be. Perhaps the as seen in from the bottom would look good up there?

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Josh880 12 years ago

Real Professional, Definitely Eye Catching, The only thing I would change is how visible it is for your prospects to get on your email list. You can miss out on a lot of people who don't know their supposed to sign up.
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elasu13

12 years ago

Cant fault it, Loved the video.

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HammerItHome

12 years ago

You are getting the point across. Good start...

You definitely need a proper logo at the top. The black and dark grays do not compliment the light blue gradient tones below. Make the video a bit smaller, it's too overpowering. Have some bullet points with some key features of your service. Point an arrow to the CTA button. Make the button orange or green so it doesn't get mixed in with the other blues on the site (to make it more prominent).

This should be a proper launch ready starting point. After that you should split test a hundred times over!

Good luck!

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Adme

12 years ago

Pete, I agree, I just didn't want the cta to drop below the fold.

Josh, you're right. Use a BFB ...big 'n button. :-)

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jeskola

12 years ago

Personally i think you need to develop a brand - when it comes to medical people want a company with a proven track record, trust, safe etc ... you can do this with colour and typography.

Also - the site ... i'd make it softer... there's a reason why most medical/dental sites are white - it reinforces cleanliness and safety. I think you should look at this - also i know it's the countries but that red on the page is a no no - color can be a very big psychological trigger...red = blood... not really a trigger you want to to push.

Have a read of these

Color in Medical Product Design | Forma Medical Device Design

Medical Websites in the Realm of Modern Design Trends

5 Ways Hospital Design Influences Patient Health : Sensing Architecture by Maria Lorena Lehman

Think about the psycology here - what is driving the customer looking for dental treatment abroad... it may be cost, but you need to reinforce that with a sense of quality - no one wants cheap crappy work on their teeth BUT they do want cheap work from excellent Dentists.

I'd start with a cleaner design - lots of whites. I'd have testimonials... price can come across in your copy but i wouldn't have it set out like a bargain basement of dental treatment. It should be all about quality!

Hoep this helps.

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Adme

12 years ago

Hey Jeskola,

I completely agree. I appreciate the effort you put into your response and I am going to have a look. Colors were my initial dislike as well.

We are a company comprised of US Dentists who go abroad to inspect for quality. We have built the company based on safety and quality. We also built the sale on informing the patient, not selling.....and you know what happened.....it just didn't work.

Since I have started highlighting price...that has converted 200% better...at least to start. For ME, I would be concerned with safety first then savings, but the truth of the matter is, with the hundreds of patients I help, many just don't know what is good for them. Fortunately we operate with high healthcare ethics, so we take care of them when they do not.

Great reference and I REALLY appreciate every comments. Keep it coming

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jeskola

12 years ago

Originally Posted by Adme

Hey Jeskola,

I completely agree. I appreciate the effort you put into your response and I am going to have a look. Colors were my initial dislike as well.

We are a company comprised of US Dentists who go abroad to inspect for quality. We have built the company based on safety and quality. We also built the sale on informing the patient, not selling.....and you know what happened.....it just didn't work.

Since I have started highlighting price...that has converted 200% better...at least to start. For ME, I would be concerned with safety first then savings, but the truth of the matter is, with the hundreds of patients I help, many just don't know what is good for them. Fortunately we operate with high healthcare ethics, so we take care of them when they do not.

Great reference and I REALLY appreciate every comments. Keep it coming

No problem,

If you are looking for a designer to help give me a shout. I've worked with a few companies offering medical services including optical express. I can share some ideas with you - just PM me.

Steve

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Adme

12 years ago

New, I can't PM, can you PM me?

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jeskola 12 years ago

Originally Posted by Adme

New, I can't PM, can you PM me?

Just PM'd you.
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loi77

12 years ago

Originally Posted by Adme

If you are feeling generous and honest, I'd really appreciate it. Thanks !

dentaldestinations.com

Awesome, very clever! Can you do one for me? ...LOL

The graphics, videos etc are wonderful, beautiful, and very creative. The only thing and the most important element that you have to work on is a much clearer and stronger "Call to action". Also white background as suggested.

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autumnsmith

12 years ago

In addition to @ loi77 suggestions, you may want to emphasize on what Benefits you could provide to your visitors. The overall design and style looks amazing, professional and impressive..

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Adme

12 years ago

I really appreciate the comments everyone!!! Really helpful constructive criticism and it's always nice to get praise as well :-)

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christinelong

12 years ago

I would personally make the light blue at the bottom a darker blue like used on your buttons and take out the gray in the middle. Also, as far as building your lead list, I would put the form directly on the home page and make the form stand out more by reducing the video size. Overall the style is nice, and the video is great. I also agree that you need a logo.

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BHeard

12 years ago

Great start.
Colours - and medical sector do not really match - White = Clean
I see a helpful previous post so won't add links to colour theme
Also the opt in is kind of lost..
In this area you can loose lots of potential signups if they miss it.. which I would..

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BlackWar

Banned 12 years ago

Really cool.. You're so clever..

Specially like your video.. Do more work with your logo..
My ratings for your site is 8 out of 10..
Good start and keep it up dude..

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WebdevelopmentGroup

12 years ago

Good Job!, Looks clean..

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shantanu

12 years ago

it is not that bad which i was expected after reading some feedbacks it is quite good and clean but have to work on that a lot make all colour combination bright by using white and peach colour.