Review my squidoo page

by Mctavish

Posted: 12 years ago 29 replies

WEB DESIGN

Please review my squidoo page

Click this link-->>http://www.squidoo.com/cheap-tag-heuer-watches

#page #review #squidoo

mmrumii 12 years ago

It's beautiful but not perfect to me.
I don't know why but It happened. I think you should use some attractive images and
try to make the page larger also. If you want to add a beautiful banner then i think it will be the great idea. go on.
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Mctavish 12 years ago

Thanks for your valuable comments.. i will correct it thanks
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benjigbird 12 years ago

it serves the purpose I believe. best of luck with it.
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System Wide Solutions 12 years ago

You may use some attractive text with good color combination. The text with relevant keywords will draw you more visitors.
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derek.ang 12 years ago

adding more widgets will enhanced it.
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powerofschool 12 years ago

You need to add some more content about the topic you have chosen .
It is better to write u pto 500 words. Because the content is very low.
And it will not be attracted to visitors to go a head.
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feliciayapsl 12 years ago

There's not much content in there. It'd be good to put in content (for each Tag Heuer watch, example). Put some pictures too. It is too plain.
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johnes4th 12 years ago

At a glance...

There is no valuable content on this lens... plus the title is Top 10 and you only list 4

The little bit of content that there is available is poorly written...

"the style which makes you stylish"
"The only thing which men will be attracted in their minds of wrists to make the world look better."

The poll module doesn't have a poll and the prediction module doesn't make sense.
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g705 12 years ago

I would really recommend you to add more content, in the site and explain to your users which is the purpose of your site. That way people will be able to understand more and proceed.

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G705
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lisakleinweber 12 years ago

Wow, that lens needs a lot of work. I'm surprised you were able to publish it. You need a ton more modules, and intro photo, more options ... basically what the last few people have said on here.
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avanwhy 12 years ago

Your link is not working.
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- lsargent 12 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by avanwhy
  
  Your link is not working.
  
  Yeah, I'm seeing the same. Did you delete the lens recently?
  
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System Wide Solutions 12 years ago

I got this

There’s nothing here. Perhaps you were given the wrong URL?
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antac

Banned 12 years ago

Unique design. It is really different. The navigation is easy and sleek.
I absolutely love the navigation.
You use awesome menu bar and banner.
Overall great design.

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kislany

12 years ago

Originally Posted by antac

Unique design. It is really different. The navigation is easy and sleek.
I absolutely love the navigation.
You use awesome menu bar and banner.
Overall great design.

Um...there's nothing there, the guy has long deleted the lens. Are we looking at the same thing here?

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cssbros 12 years ago

The header has, a big unused space on it,

I suggest add something to make the design balance.
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webdik 12 years ago

Hey. You have no any lens on Squidoo. I just check your link but on there nothing.
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Mitja Drame 12 years ago

The lens is gone, nothing to check
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Danish01 12 years ago

Now i think it's removed from squidoo..............
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- pukem 12 years ago
  
  site is nice and clean and load speed is ok for me. good luck with the site
  
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aussienet12 12 years ago

Taken down!

"There’s nothing here. Perhaps you were given the wrong URL? "
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wellm97 12 years ago

there is a lot of work you need to do.I think you removed the content from your lense because I did not find content there.
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- whiterock 12 years ago
  
  According to me its pretty simple page and you should add more spice to it, you should add more nice images and add more colors to it too
  
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  kislany 12 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by whiterock
  
  According to me its pretty simple page and you should add more spice to it, you should add more nice images and add more colors to it too
  
  Um am I the only one who sees a deleted lens there when clicking on the link? Where do these comments above actually come from? What lens are you guys looking at? :confused:
  
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Danish01 12 years ago

I think your squidoo page now removed from squidoo.......
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jharri 12 years ago

Set up a google webmasters account and you will instantly find out all the things that need to be fixed and improved.
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samstephan9 12 years ago

It's not working please check your URL again.
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admin@subashseo.com 12 years ago

Yes your squidoo page is not available now. Please check it.
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kazim 12 years ago

Design is clean but I think you can make your site look more interesting by adding more graphics.
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