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Graphic Design Work - Need Opinion

by thedanbrown
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Hey Warriors,

I need an opinion on a new health company I'm launching. To build up some buzz and traffic before the actual website is live we launched a 'splash page' to engage users and encourage sign ups. The page is fun an interactive and should increase sharing.

Please let me know what you think of the design and the overall concept. I would appreciate any and all feedback!

Thanks so much

The link is : Track your Progress, Share and Team Up, Reach your Goals | Vitamob
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  • Profile picture of the author sodevious
    The design is great, but I think that it's hard to get what the page is and what it's for.
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  • Profile picture of the author dconjar
    I agree with sodevious about the lack of clarity, but I absolutely love the design. It's a great example of using HTML5 and SVG to do cool things.

    You might want to post it to Hacker News, if you haven't already. Could get some traction there.
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  • Profile picture of the author thedanbrown
    Awesome!

    Ya, all the news outlets that drive traffic to this page explain what the company is all about. The user will understand this is not the actual website but instead a tool to get a free membership. Thanks for the reviews guys, keep em' coming!

    I would love for anyone to spread the word about the splash page.

    I'm also right about to contact Hacker News, thanks for the tip
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  • Profile picture of the author learric
    Love the site! Graphics looks great and you seem to have everything in the right place for some good conversions. I like the popup when you hover the "Start Now" link, great job. As long as people already know why they're at the page I think it will be very effective.
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  • Profile picture of the author dconjar
    If you post it on Hacker News, you may want to mention the technologies involved in the title.

    Something like:

    My Weekend Project: An HTML5-Powered BMI Calculator... with a running silhouette

    Just a thought.
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  • Profile picture of the author thedanbrown
    Thanks for the advice! Going to repost it with that title lol
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  • Profile picture of the author trcapro
    Looks great!
    Still a little confusing about what it's for.

    Also, the scale on step 1 might be able to be tweaked a little better.

    Your "coming soon" sign covers up Vitamob's name, which I'm assuming is pretty important.
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  • Profile picture of the author mmrumii
    Wow ! what a grate site design you have created. Everything is looking cool and Beautiful color combination. But to my browser , it's loading slowly. It doesn't matter. When I visit your site, it was great experience to me. I really really like your site design. go on with your great responsibility.
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  • Profile picture of the author blogfreakz
    the interactivity of the site looks great i think the target for this would be the people who wants to check whether their obese or not right now loads fast on Fire Fox but when I check on IE it loads slow hmm that's weird ...
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  • Profile picture of the author CyborgX
    Wow...great site. I just calculated my BMI. Its underweight. By the way, your site looks really good. Carry on the good work.
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    • Profile picture of the author hilarious89
      Originally Posted by Tear Stalker View Post

      Wow...great site. I just calculated my BMI. Its underweight. By the way, your site looks really good. Carry on the good work.
      You should eat and sleep more reducing posting on warrior forum otherwise you will lose on fight. Anyways I am Normal (23.3)
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      • Profile picture of the author CyborgX
        Originally Posted by hilarious89 View Post

        You should eat and sleep more reducing posting on warrior forum otherwise you will lose on fight. Anyways I am Normal (23.3)
        Thanks for the advice. Looks like you are not as hilarious as you sound. And about the fight...I don't need to fight. I need to think and do.
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  • Profile picture of the author katepeter
    The design is awesome .. A great work done by you .. nice efforts done by you ..!!
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  • Profile picture of the author Habibie
    wow.... i really love your work Dan Brown. Its very simple and attractive
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  • Profile picture of the author keithotzkie
    Well, the design looks great and the homepage is not messy to look at..
    But still, Visitors will still wonder what your website is for..
    I suggest you could add up more info about it..
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    • Profile picture of the author Johnny Pope
      Hi thedanbrown -

      Very cool design and neat use of tech!

      One thing that I found I wanted to do was Go Back. I entered some data and had no option to either change it or add to it (activities). Be nice to have a back button!

      Perhaps a small description about what it's all about and what a person will get at the end - some benefits! For those that arrive to your site without having read anything. Can't hurt to be more descriptive!

      Other than that - AWESOME!!!!!!!!!

      Johnny
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  • Profile picture of the author rising_sun
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    Little entertainment I am getting from here right now.Is this site is incomplete?I measured my B.M.I.I want to measure others.After visiting this site I realize it is essential for me.I bookmarked it.It is a PHP site,style is given by css/HTML5.Pretty nice job.
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    • Profile picture of the author hilarious89
      Originally Posted by rising_sun View Post

      Little entertainment I am getting from here right now.Is this site is incomplete?I measured my B.M.I.I want to measure others.After visiting this site I realize it is essential for me.I bookmarked it.It is a PHP site,style is given by css/HTML5.Pretty nice job.
      umm, nice to see you after long time. Anyways can you share us your BMI point. Mine is 23.3 which I have shared before?
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  • Profile picture of the author lanotdesign
    Very well done!
    Great use of typography, great color combination and a nice touch of animation.
    10/10
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  • Profile picture of the author davidreid
    That is looking so nice! You should really think about submitting it to awwwards.com
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  • Profile picture of the author tracehaskins
    !!! Amazing. I've been a web designer for 15 years, and you've made me jealous. I want to create something cool like this. :-o Kudos! Keep up the great work and best of success to you!
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  • Profile picture of the author jimylouise
    I think that graphic design work is a nice thing. There is importance of it too in the market. So,one can take interest in this & learn this course also. This will benefit you a lot.
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  • Profile picture of the author Jordi
    At first I thought it was some kind of dating site, but then again the design looks simple and clean as well as credibility is there with interaction. How bout instead of typing in the height and stuff can you just put in the slide bar for people to slide the cursor to the desire height or weight. I think people have short attention spam and the would just like to click things more than stop and type it in. See how that works for ya.
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