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Please Review my First Funnel

by 100k
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So I have made my first funnel, I would like to get some feedback from those of you that have the experience in that area.

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Is my landing page all right?

Video all right?

Is the course it self good?

Anything you would change?

Thanks in advance.
#funnel #review
  • Profile picture of the author sitedesignadvisor
    I know this sounds corny, but perhaps some subtle background music to set a tone would be nice! I think that the centre container is too skinny, I would go for the todays standard width otherwise it makes the site look dated. Min 950px width.

    I signed up for the course but the email took a while to get through, who are you using for your mailing list?
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    • Profile picture of the author 100k
      Originally Posted by sitedesignadvisor View Post

      I know this sounds corny, but perhaps some subtle background music to set a tone would be nice! I think that the centre container is too skinny, I would go for the todays standard width otherwise it makes the site look dated. Min 950px width.

      I signed up for the course but the email took a while to get through, who are you using for your mailing list?
      hey, I am using a plugin called WP gorilla lead and I am unable to make the width any bigger.

      Thanks for the "tone" tip I will see what I can do there.

      I am using aweber, it normally takes 20 sec. to 1min. tops for them to send their emails. How long did you have to wait?
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  • Profile picture of the author chrisonbd
    Originally Posted by 100k View Post

    Is my landing page all right?
    Video all right?
    Is the course it self good?
    Anything you would change?
    Hi mate (and well done on your success), I think you've got a good talking voice but, maybe you could elaborate a bit more on your story to make it a little more enticing? Also I think the partially hidden picture background looks a bit odd. Just my thoughts, I am no expert on this..
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    • Profile picture of the author 100k
      Originally Posted by chrisonbd View Post

      Hi mate (and well done on your success), I think you've got a good talking voice but, maybe you could elaborate a bit more on your story to make it a little more enticing? Also I think the partially hidden picture background looks a bit odd. Just my thoughts, I am no expert on this..
      Yeah, the squeeze page is not selling hard enough... its not leaving a person think... "I NEED TO KNOW WHAT THIS IS"... is it?

      We will have to fix this

      Thanks for your feedback!!!!! Much appreciated.
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  • Profile picture of the author bloodyuber
    auto player is a must here and it will be perfect. try viddler for 14 days
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    • Profile picture of the author 100k
      Originally Posted by bloodyuber View Post

      auto player is a must here and it will be perfect. try viddler for 14 days
      Thanks, implemented that now.

      Youtube has that function too....

      just use the old embed code and add "&autoplay=1" after the url link (should be in 2 places).
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  • Profile picture of the author wordpressmania
    The landing page seems without any content... You need to add some content to attract visitor attention..
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    • Profile picture of the author 100k
      Originally Posted by wordpressmania View Post

      The landing page seems without any content... You need to add some content to attract visitor attention..
      Hi,

      I dont really want any distraction

      Just want them to watch the video and submit email. I think adding content would just cause distraction ... but thanks for your views.
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  • Profile picture of the author 100k
    Originally Posted by jaasmit View Post

    Your site is good but you need to do some more development of it.
    Try to do some different things with your website so that you can attract more and more traffic.
    That is so generic. I thought you were trying to build up post counts.

    Can you please elaborate on what you mean by "different things" ?
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  • Profile picture of the author Rhoody
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    Honestly,

    here is how the sites loads for me

    white background, square in the middle
    video starts, still white background
    suddenly flashy blue color of the pool, distracts from video
    you have a crisp background,
    a blurry square which is not centered
    I was waiting if that also gets crisp and paid more attention than the actual video
    until I looked at the video it was over and I was not tempted to go back and watch it again

    So I guess the site had no "I want to know more" effect to me.
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  • Profile picture of the author vCr8
    Hi 100K, IMHO I think that the guy at the back ground is a bit distracting and odd... At first I thought that the video had too much mystery on it that, made me think that this is all too shady... but as the video played on I understood how it works, it still did not entice me to give my email. I'm not sure if it's just me or what.. I also wished you had a more attractive video. Nevertheless, the video and background loaded quite fast on my side.
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  • Profile picture of the author 100k
    THANKS for the feedback guys!

    Much appreciated !!!

    Keep them coming!
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  • Profile picture of the author 100k
    Thanks for all the help guys!

    I have updated the landing page:

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    Now the video auto plays, and I have made the video MUCH More enticing! And changed background.

    Thoughts ? You like ?
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