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Squeeze Page Design Feedback Needed - I am out of ideas

by webpeon
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I've been split testing a whole bunch of different squeeze page designs for a facebook based squeeze page I have.. So far the current one is performing better than the others.

I'd just like to ask for some feedback on where you think it can be improved based on the fact its being marketed on an entertainment platform not a website I've noticed that the standard video or long text squeeze pages don't get much action.

I am getting about 40 visitors to that page per day using facebook ads but not converting anywhere near what I want yet. Though It is making a little profit I am looking for the next great tweak I can make and am personally running out of ideas.

Any suggestions welcome (link to the squeeze page is in my signature)
#design #feedback #ideas #needed #page #squeeze
  • Profile picture of the author MrMonetize
    Have you tried removing everything from that group of people downwards, so its really short and then putting an optin box for Aweber. You can market that product to them constantly, because you only get one chance to sell them with that page. It might be too long, plus you could do with a buy button if you kept that sales page. I'm not sure people like been sold to on Facebook tho so perhaps an opt-in might work better. Split test it.
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    • Profile picture of the author webpeon
      Originally Posted by MrMonetize View Post

      Have you tried removing everything from that group of people downwards, so its really short and then putting an optin box for Aweber. You can market that product to them constantly, because you only get one chance to sell them with that page. It might be too long, plus you could do with a buy button if you kept that sales page. I'm not sure people like been sold to on Facebook tho so perhaps an opt-in might work better. Split test it.
      There are people that buy products on facebook. You just need to grab them at the right time, when they are 'in the market' for that product. facebook ads are a great way to find these types of people and grab them while fan pages will let you build a relationship with those people.

      I think you hit the nail on the head at which point I lose people, and the key is people. not the product. I lose them when theres no more images of people on the page...

      Can anyone confirm this?
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      • Profile picture of the author MrMonetize
        Originally Posted by webpeon View Post

        There are people that buy products on facebook. You just need to grab them at the right time, when they are 'in the market' for that product. facebook ads are a great way to find these types of people and grab them while fan pages will let you build a relationship with those people.

        I think you hit the nail on the head at which point I lose people, and the key is people. not the product. I lose them when theres no more images of people on the page...

        Can anyone confirm this?
        I have sold products through Facebook, but its usually impulse buys etc. I found creating an email optin form to be more effective. People need to see your offer a few times for them to buy it usually, and when they come through from a Facebook Ad they either buy, or go. At least get them on an email list and then you can try sell to them again and again.
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  • Profile picture of the author johnpea
    I've never found facebook traffic to convert very well - people are generally on fb to interact with their mates, not buy stuff. Personally, I'd go for search engine traffic where people r are out there looking for stuff.
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  • Profile picture of the author Confined To Life
    I wouldn't really call this a squeeze page at all. You need to follow some of the basic squeeze page principles here.

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  • Profile picture of the author WPcrew
    I agree with CTL this is not lead gen landing page (often called a squeeze page)


    You can see some good examples here

    Your Landing Page Sucks! Here are 10 Examples That Don’t… | Unbounce

    Webtrends Lead-Gen: A Lesson in Cool Simplicity | Unbounce


    Most important factors of higly converting pages are:

    1.Simple and obvious writing

    2.Clean design with good contrast

    3.Whitespace and clarity

    4.Clear call to action buttons

    These factors arent incorporated into your page , so maybe the best solution for you is to purchase a profesional designed landing page from themeforest.

    Landing Pages | ThemeForest
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