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MY first real attempt, need some hard critisizm

by Christopherson
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Okay, with the last 3$ I had in paypal here is my associate website, I coded it in html, and css. The only way I am promoting is through Facebook, here:
Limitless Jewelry | Facebook

My website:
Limitless Jewelry

I need some critisizm on my website, to improve it with the little skills I know.
Also, I need ideas on what other promotions I can do, and how to do them.
One last thing. When it shows my website on Facebook, it shows when it was first launched, how do I make it so that it shows details about my website.

All help is appreciated, and when I become more advanced in this, I would be glad to help others on the forum, and contribute my part of knowledge.

-thanks, Christopherson
#attempt #critisizm #hard #real
  • Profile picture of the author RK Corbes
    Here's my criticism, bad design because it's not attractive. Jewelry related sites must be Elegant because your products is elegant. Try to use the pictures of your real jewelries you are selling, the most elegant is the best.

    You should have colors, at least 3 combination of colors. Background color should be different with your body color so when people see your site, it's not hard to see the content.

    As for the design, look at this website for inspiration from your competitors.
    Top 50 Jewelry Sites - Review of the best Jewelry sites

    For the promotion, rank for local keywords , sample is "affordable jewelry + city" , no one will buy jewelries outside your state / city because it's expensive.

    This will be a long topic to discuss, revise your website first, then show to us the update.
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  • Profile picture of the author jamaks
    Hi, look after the basics first. On your home page you are alternating between jewelry and jewlery. The spelling should be jewelry throughout. You really need to add more content to the home and second level pages, since the only usable content is on the third level. Maybe just my personal preferences but why open the "shop" in a new window. Sorry if it sounds harsh but if you wish to get a return on your investment of time and money you should make the site fit for purpose. Jim
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