Please Review my Site

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After gaming, I've made a new blog on Blogging and Affiliate marketing. Will you please review my site especially my squeeze/landing page? Any suggestion is highly appreciated.

http://www.makemoneykid.com
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  • Profile picture of the author dwoods
    First off, looks nice -- needs some stylistic tweaks but overall looks nice man.

    Have you looked at it on a computer with larger screen resolution? Here's how the page looks on my monitor: http://i.imgur.com/jQQIZ.jpg -- and l can't scroll to view the rest of the content. So l'd used fixed height/width instead of %'s of your main content div to prevent this odd adjustment of the layout.

    That aside here's a few suggestions:
    1.) remove the social bookmark icons. I highly doubt anyone will ever click/use them to share the page - so remove all unnecessary exit points. You want your visitor to join your list - period that is the most important action on the page. At least try a split test with and without the social bookmarking icons and see what the difference is in your opt-in rate. Same goes with the themeforest.net affiliate link.

    2.) Make the "enter your email here" field bigger. The red button is huge, so to should be the "enter your email" field.

    3.) The blog is nice and clean; post more content.

    Good luck!
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    • Profile picture of the author MakeMoneyKid
      Originally Posted by dwoods View Post

      First off, looks nice -- needs some stylistic tweaks but overall looks nice man.

      Have you looked at it on a computer with larger screen resolution? Here's how the page looks on my monitor: http://i.imgur.com/jQQIZ.jpg -- and l can't scroll to view the rest of the content. So l'd used fixed height/width instead of %'s of your main content div to prevent this odd adjustment of the layout.

      That aside here's a few suggestions:
      1.) Make the "enter your email here" field bigger. The red button is huge, so to should be the "enter your email" field.

      Good luck!
      The Subscription box is created using GetResponse. How I can increase the email field?
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      • Profile picture of the author JimDucharme
        Originally Posted by MakeMoneyKid View Post

        The Subscription box is created using GetResponse. How I can increase the email field?
        HI MMK,

        You can't change the individual field sizes, but you can of course change a lot of the attributes of the form itself. Try some different templates or perhaps change the text on the button to read: Enter Email for Instant Access.

        Regards,
        jim
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  • Profile picture of the author run
    For me it is worst than Dwoods. Here is the screenshot: http://i46.tinypic.com/mauhar.png
    As recommend as Dwoods, too for the Subscription box!
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    • Profile picture of the author MakeMoneyKid
      Originally Posted by run View Post

      For me it is worst than Dwoods. Here is the screenshot: http://i46.tinypic.com/mauhar.png
      As recommend as Dwoods, too for the Subscription box!
      What makes it worst? Please specify.
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      • Profile picture of the author run
        Originally Posted by MakeMoneyKid View Post

        What makes it worst? Please specify.
        As in screen grab, I could only see that part without any more scrolling. Therefore, I feel lost some words below.
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        • Profile picture of the author MakeMoneyKid
          Originally Posted by run View Post

          As in screen grab, I could only see that part without any more scrolling. Therefore, I feel lost some words below.
          So it's the resolution issue. Thanks for the feedback.
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  • Profile picture of the author MSC
    Besides the cartoon character, which looks awesome, other stuff (from graphics side) looks a bit old fashioned. Try looking for design blogs for some modern graphics inspiration.
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  • Profile picture of the author BeautifulWebsites
    This is a cute idea, you will want to resize your graphics so they are not pixelated. Love your domain name.

    Your button to go to the website should be more prominent.
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  • Profile picture of the author logocows
    Looks fine but I think the images are somewhat pixelated.

    Try changing the layout and have some high quality images / graphics.

    Good luck!
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    • Profile picture of the author MakeMoneyKid
      Originally Posted by logocows View Post

      Looks fine but I think the images are somewhat pixelated.

      Try changing the layout and have some high quality images / graphics.

      Good luck!
      Which images? The header?
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  • Profile picture of the author RenderTheWeb
    So the site looks awesome and I love the domain name.

    Okay so this is what isn't right.

    The arrow and the texts are pixelated. Also my display is at 1280x800 and I believe there is a few things missing on the bottom.

    http://i49.tinypic.com/28ujscm.png

    Hey, off topic here if you're ever interested in selling the domain let me know.
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  • Profile picture of the author YemTv
    Nice work,keep it up
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  • Profile picture of the author zotown
    hmmm I like the background image. The optin box doesnt fit and I can only read half the site as there are no scroll bars. Or is it meant to be like that? Text read "to download the ebook"... then the image is cut of and no scroll bars to scroll down?
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    • Profile picture of the author MakeMoneyKid
      Originally Posted by zotown View Post

      hmmm I like the background image. The optin box doesnt fit and I can only read half the site as there are no scroll bars. Or is it meant to be like that? Text read "to download the ebook"... then the image is cut of and no scroll bars to scroll down?
      Yes it is meant to be like that, so that visitors end up with only two choices: either skip or Download *BINGO*
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  • Profile picture of the author carolwdesign24
    The theme is nice but the image is pixelated and the text at the bottom is not clearly see at the screen. However, it just need re-size to view all in the screen.
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    • Profile picture of the author MakeMoneyKid
      Originally Posted by carolwdesign24 View Post

      The theme is nice but the image is pixelated and the text at the bottom is not clearly see at the screen. However, it just need re-size to view all in the screen.
      Can you please mention what is your resolution screen? People here are having problem as their resolution screen is 1280x...
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  • Profile picture of the author whland
    Nice squeeze page and blog. You definitely have got a great domain name. I love it.

    Chad
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    • Profile picture of the author MakeMoneyKid
      Originally Posted by whland View Post

      Nice squeeze page and blog. You definitely have got a great domain name. I love it.

      Chad
      Thanks! I'm very creative, you know
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  • Profile picture of the author mikedex
    Like your header section banner. Its very nice.
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  • Profile picture of the author 723Media
    You shouldn't set the background to a single large image. That's why it's blurry. Also, if you resize the browser, your image doesn't line up with the design. For example, make your browser window smaller and your arrow pointing to the opt-in box disappears behind it.

    You can change the size of the fields in your opt-in form with some pretty simple CSS. In fact, you can just up the padding on 'wf-input' to make the box appear bigger.

    The styles are included when you copy and paste your form from GetResponse.
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    • Profile picture of the author MakeMoneyKid
      Originally Posted by 723Media View Post

      You shouldn't set the background to a single large image. That's why it's blurry. Also, if you resize the browser, your image doesn't line up with the design. For example, make your browser window smaller and your arrow pointing to the opt-in box disappears behind it.

      You can change the size of the fields in your opt-in form with some pretty simple CSS. In fact, you can just up the padding on 'wf-input' to make the box appear bigger.

      The styles are included when you copy and paste your form from GetResponse.
      Actually I don't know how do I add a subscription box over an image and so decided to make that image as the background. However, it is creating mismatch due to resolution issues. Can you tell me how do I fix that? You sound like a pro (as does your Graphicriver portfolio). Thanks in advance
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  • Profile picture of the author Chelsie1687
    seems like it needs some polishing if you want honest opinion.
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    • Profile picture of the author MakeMoneyKid
      Originally Posted by Chelsie1687 View Post

      seems like it needs some polishing if you want honest opinion.
      Yes don't hesitate to criticize. I want honest opinion :p
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  • Profile picture of the author danilion55
    Nice. attractive domain name beautiful design all things are handsome
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  • Profile picture of the author keysersoze
    Looks really good Makemoneykid!
    If i would have to change anything it would be the header image.
    Everything els looks great
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  • Profile picture of the author chinmoy123
    Landing page looks great, the only thing I expect some interesting text on the ribbon/banner just bellow the kid.
    Another issue is, there is no relevancy between landing page and actual site, except the social media buttons. At least you can turn the green header into orange/yellow.
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    • Profile picture of the author MakeMoneyKid
      Originally Posted by chinmoy123 View Post

      Landing page looks great, the only thing I expect some interesting text on the ribbon/banner just bellow the kid.
      Another issue is, there is no relevancy between landing page and actual site, except the social media buttons. At least you can turn the green header into orange/yellow.
      Is it anyway going to affect on my visitors?
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  • Profile picture of the author etechadvice
    Add an Header instead of Text. Other than that everything looks good. Esp your landing page looks great.
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  • Profile picture of the author techmaish
    The last banner "To download this ebook" is not appearing on the screen. There is scroll bar that is why i can't scroll down to see what is written on the banner.

    Full Screen allow me to view the whole website but normal screen is not allowing me to view the bottom of the website.
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    • Profile picture of the author MakeMoneyKid
      Originally Posted by techmaish View Post

      The last banner "To download this ebook" is not appearing on the screen. There is scroll bar that is why i can't scroll down to see what is written on the banner.

      Full Screen allow me to view the whole website but normal screen is not allowing me to view the bottom of the website.
      Now, that's the most different feedback. What is your screen resolution? Are you surfing on mobile?
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  • Profile picture of the author Dialnfix247
    you have awesome website, nice look, and design of your sites.
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    • Profile picture of the author Edk
      Opt-in boxes tend to perform better when at the top right of the page. Best is if you split test: top right vs where you have it. It's not a matter of someone's opinion, then!
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  • Profile picture of the author kazim
    Very informative and appealing. Colors are great and structure rocks.
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  • Profile picture of the author Jonas Glad
    For the squeeze page--the image is stretched, you should just make one with bigger dimensions. Also you have to manually remove "Enter your email address here" in my browser...so use some JS for that and instead of "We respect your privacy" I'd write something more appealing.
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    • Profile picture of the author MakeMoneyKid
      Originally Posted by Jonas Glad View Post

      ...and instead of "We respect your privacy" I'd write something more appealing.
      That "we respect your privacy" is by default. I'm using GetResponse. I know how turn them ON or OFF but I don't see how to edit that text. Also what do you think I should write in that field?
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  • Profile picture of the author sohailblog
    Its very informative blog...
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