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11 years ago

First off, looks nice -- needs some stylistic tweaks but overall looks nice man.

Have you looked at it on a computer with larger screen resolution? Here's how the page looks on my monitor: http://i.imgur.com/jQQIZ.jpg -- and l can't scroll to view the rest of the content. So l'd used fixed height/width instead of %'s of your main content div to prevent this odd adjustment of the layout.

That aside here's a few suggestions:
1.) remove the social bookmark icons. I highly doubt anyone will ever click/use them to share the page - so remove all unnecessary exit points. You want your visitor to join your list - period that is the most important action on the page. At least try a split test with and without the social bookmarking icons and see what the difference is in your opt-in rate. Same goes with the themeforest.net affiliate link.

2.) Make the "enter your email here" field bigger. The red button is huge, so to should be the "enter your email" field.

3.) The blog is nice and clean; post more content.

Good luck!

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MakeMoneyKid

11 years ago

Originally Posted by dwoods

First off, looks nice -- needs some stylistic tweaks but overall looks nice man.

Have you looked at it on a computer with larger screen resolution? Here's how the page looks on my monitor: http://i.imgur.com/jQQIZ.jpg -- and l can't scroll to view the rest of the content. So l'd used fixed height/width instead of %'s of your main content div to prevent this odd adjustment of the layout.

That aside here's a few suggestions:
1.) Make the "enter your email here" field bigger. The red button is huge, so to should be the "enter your email" field.

Good luck!

The Subscription box is created using GetResponse. How I can increase the email field?

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JimDucharme 11 years ago

Originally Posted by MakeMoneyKid

The Subscription box is created using GetResponse. How I can increase the email field?

HI MMK,

You can't change the individual field sizes, but you can of course change a lot of the attributes of the form itself. Try some different templates or perhaps change the text on the button to read: Enter Email for Instant Access.

Regards,
jim
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11 years ago

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run

11 years ago

For me it is worst than Dwoods. Here is the screenshot: http://i46.tinypic.com/mauhar.png
As recommend as Dwoods, too for the Subscription box!

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MakeMoneyKid 11 years ago

Originally Posted by run

For me it is worst than Dwoods. Here is the screenshot: http://i46.tinypic.com/mauhar.png
As recommend as Dwoods, too for the Subscription box!

What makes it worst? Please specify.
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- run 11 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by MakeMoneyKid
  
  What makes it worst? Please specify.
  
  As in screen grab, I could only see that part without any more scrolling. Therefore, I feel lost some words below.
  
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  I just wanna tell you that most of the links in the signature are trash and/or a trap to make you pay!
  
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  MakeMoneyKid 11 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by run
  
  As in screen grab, I could only see that part without any more scrolling. Therefore, I feel lost some words below.
  
  So it's the resolution issue. Thanks for the feedback.
  
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MSC

11 years ago

Besides the cartoon character, which looks awesome, other stuff (from graphics side) looks a bit old fashioned. Try looking for design blogs for some modern graphics inspiration.

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BeautifulWebsites

11 years ago

This is a cute idea, you will want to resize your graphics so they are not pixelated. Love your domain name.

Your button to go to the website should be more prominent.

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logocows

11 years ago

Looks fine but I think the images are somewhat pixelated.

Try changing the layout and have some high quality images / graphics.

Good luck!

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MakeMoneyKid 11 years ago

Originally Posted by logocows

Looks fine but I think the images are somewhat pixelated.

Try changing the layout and have some high quality images / graphics.

Good luck!

Which images? The header?
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11 years ago

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11 years ago

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RenderTheWeb

11 years ago

So the site looks awesome and I love the domain name.

Okay so this is what isn't right.

The arrow and the texts are pixelated. Also my display is at 1280x800 and I believe there is a few things missing on the bottom.

http://i49.tinypic.com/28ujscm.png

Hey, off topic here if you're ever interested in selling the domain let me know.

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YemTv

11 years ago

Nice work,keep it up

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zotown

11 years ago

hmmm I like the background image. The optin box doesnt fit and I can only read half the site as there are no scroll bars. Or is it meant to be like that? Text read "to download the ebook"... then the image is cut of and no scroll bars to scroll down?

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MakeMoneyKid

11 years ago

Originally Posted by zotown

hmmm I like the background image. The optin box doesnt fit and I can only read half the site as there are no scroll bars. Or is it meant to be like that? Text read "to download the ebook"... then the image is cut of and no scroll bars to scroll down?

Yes it is meant to be like that, so that visitors end up with only two choices: either skip or Download *BINGO*

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carolwdesign24

11 years ago

The theme is nice but the image is pixelated and the text at the bottom is not clearly see at the screen. However, it just need re-size to view all in the screen.

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MakeMoneyKid

11 years ago

Originally Posted by carolwdesign24

The theme is nice but the image is pixelated and the text at the bottom is not clearly see at the screen. However, it just need re-size to view all in the screen.

Can you please mention what is your resolution screen? People here are having problem as their resolution screen is 1280x...

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whland

11 years ago

Nice squeeze page and blog. You definitely have got a great domain name. I love it.

Chad

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MakeMoneyKid 11 years ago

Originally Posted by whland

Nice squeeze page and blog. You definitely have got a great domain name. I love it.

Chad

Thanks! I'm very creative, you know
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mikedex

11 years ago

Like your header section banner. Its very nice.

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723Media

11 years ago

You shouldn't set the background to a single large image. That's why it's blurry. Also, if you resize the browser, your image doesn't line up with the design. For example, make your browser window smaller and your arrow pointing to the opt-in box disappears behind it.

You can change the size of the fields in your opt-in form with some pretty simple CSS. In fact, you can just up the padding on 'wf-input' to make the box appear bigger.

The styles are included when you copy and paste your form from GetResponse.

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MakeMoneyKid

11 years ago

Originally Posted by 723Media

You shouldn't set the background to a single large image. That's why it's blurry. Also, if you resize the browser, your image doesn't line up with the design. For example, make your browser window smaller and your arrow pointing to the opt-in box disappears behind it.

You can change the size of the fields in your opt-in form with some pretty simple CSS. In fact, you can just up the padding on 'wf-input' to make the box appear bigger.

The styles are included when you copy and paste your form from GetResponse.

Actually I don't know how do I add a subscription box over an image and so decided to make that image as the background. However, it is creating mismatch due to resolution issues. Can you tell me how do I fix that? You sound like a pro (as does your Graphicriver portfolio). Thanks in advance

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Chelsie1687

11 years ago

seems like it needs some polishing if you want honest opinion.

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MakeMoneyKid 11 years ago

Originally Posted by Chelsie1687

seems like it needs some polishing if you want honest opinion.

Yes don't hesitate to criticize. I want honest opinion :p
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danilion55

11 years ago

Nice. attractive domain name beautiful design all things are handsome

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keysersoze

11 years ago

Looks really good Makemoneykid!
If i would have to change anything it would be the header image.
Everything els looks great

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chinmoy123

11 years ago

Landing page looks great, the only thing I expect some interesting text on the ribbon/banner just bellow the kid.
Another issue is, there is no relevancy between landing page and actual site, except the social media buttons. At least you can turn the green header into orange/yellow.

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MakeMoneyKid

11 years ago

Originally Posted by chinmoy123

Landing page looks great, the only thing I expect some interesting text on the ribbon/banner just bellow the kid.
Another issue is, there is no relevancy between landing page and actual site, except the social media buttons. At least you can turn the green header into orange/yellow.

Is it anyway going to affect on my visitors?

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etechadvice

11 years ago

Add an Header instead of Text. Other than that everything looks good. Esp your landing page looks great.

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techmaish

11 years ago

The last banner "To download this ebook" is not appearing on the screen. There is scroll bar that is why i can't scroll down to see what is written on the banner.

Full Screen allow me to view the whole website but normal screen is not allowing me to view the bottom of the website.

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MakeMoneyKid

11 years ago

Originally Posted by techmaish

The last banner "To download this ebook" is not appearing on the screen. There is scroll bar that is why i can't scroll down to see what is written on the banner.

Full Screen allow me to view the whole website but normal screen is not allowing me to view the bottom of the website.

Now, that's the most different feedback. What is your screen resolution? Are you surfing on mobile?

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Dialnfix247

11 years ago

you have awesome website, nice look, and design of your sites.

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Edk 11 years ago

Opt-in boxes tend to perform better when at the top right of the page. Best is if you split test: top right vs where you have it. It's not a matter of someone's opinion, then!
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kazim

11 years ago

Very informative and appealing. Colors are great and structure rocks.

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Jonas Glad

11 years ago

For the squeeze page--the image is stretched, you should just make one with bigger dimensions. Also you have to manually remove "Enter your email address here" in my browser...so use some JS for that and instead of "We respect your privacy" I'd write something more appealing.

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MakeMoneyKid 11 years ago

Originally Posted by Jonas Glad

...and instead of "We respect your privacy" I'd write something more appealing.

That "we respect your privacy" is by default. I'm using GetResponse. I know how turn them ON or OFF but I don't see how to edit that text. Also what do you think I should write in that field?
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sohailblog

11 years ago

Its very informative blog...

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