First Impressions on Squeeze Page/Site

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Hi all -

My landing page has been re-vamped. Can I get some feedback?

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The target market are people in the IT industry. The message I am trying to convey is the following :

"If you learn this software, you will get a job at a high salary".

To do so, I had wanted to have kind of a ticker tape (like the stock market) showing job titles and the salaries being offered. Does such an animal exist?

Any feedback or advice is greatly appreciated

TIA
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  • Profile picture of the author CpayneGo
    Hey, my first impression of your landing page is that it's difficult to read. The background interferes with the text.

    The headline and subsequent text are very ambiguous. It doesn't tell me anything about your product. I would suggest making the headline (largest text) a short phrase that states the major benefit of your product. The smaller text under that should briefly explain what the product is (ex. cloud-based software application for lawyers)

    You should also consider turning the blocks of text in the colored boxes into shorter bullet points.

    I like the ticker idea. That will surely add credibility to your landing page. I don't know of any solution for this so you may have to write the script yourself.
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    • Profile picture of the author dgmufasa
      @CpayneGo - thanks much. I changed the background to a rolling meadow. Although, it would have been nice to have a background of a city skyline.
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  • Profile picture of the author Istvan Horvath
    "If you learn this software, you will get a job at a high salary".
    But we both know (+7 billion people) that this is a lie... don't we?
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