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bhmseoservices

12 years ago

What's your website?

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Peter Hupuczi 12 years ago

Originally Posted by bhmseoservices

What's your website?

Sily me.... I have left out the most important part of the post

Sory about that, this could be because I'm diet from now ind my brain started it to
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Istvan Horvath

12 years ago

The site displays an error message from one of your WP plugins... (see at the bottom).

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GamezFever

12 years ago

Attention grabber WP Plugin gives php error!

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DJL

12 years ago

Aside from the technical problems mentioned previously, your site has numerous grammatical and spelling errors. It would benefit from careful proofreading by a native English speaker.

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Peter Hupuczi

12 years ago

Originally Posted by DJL

Aside from the technical problems mentioned previously, your site has numerous grammatical and spelling errors. It would benefit from careful proofreading by a native English speaker.

Thank you for pointing that out.

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laurencewins

12 years ago

Maybe it is just me but I personally don't like the slides. I like to be able to read something properly before it disappears.

I concur with the comments about proofreading as well. That only makes the
content look worse.

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Peter Hupuczi

12 years ago

Originally Posted by laurencewins

Maybe it is just me but I personally don't like the slides. I like to be able to read something properly before it disappears.

I concur with the comments about proofreading as well. That only makes the
content look worse.

Thanks you for your opinion. Proofreading is in progress now

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Anthony Fesalbon

12 years ago

I agree. The slider you're using is not user friendly.

I suggest you add portfolio and testimonials to make it more convincing.

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Peter Hupuczi 12 years ago

Originally Posted by Anthony Fesalbon

I agree. The slider you're using is not user friendly.

I suggest you add portfolio and testimonials to make it more convincing.

Thank You for your opinion.
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connorbringas

12 years ago

Originally Posted by Anthony Fesalbon

I agree. The slider you're using is not user friendly.

I suggest you add portfolio and testimonials to make it more convincing.

I agree, the load time of your site/slider is long as well.

Looks like you dont have a meta description on your pages? And your title tags arent very SEO friendly.

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Peter Hupuczi

12 years ago

Originally Posted by connorbringas

I agree, the load time of your site/slider is long as well.

Looks like you dont have a meta description on your pages? And your title tags arent very SEO friendly.

Thank you very much to point this out.

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Ron Killian

12 years ago

Others have pointed out the slider, I thought it kinda moved to fast. Or is it just me? Just seems kind of off-putting. Or I am just weird.

As you probably already know, there is a big gap in between the lower sections. Seems something should be there, or like something is missing.

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Peter Hupuczi

12 years ago

Originally Posted by Ron Killian

Others have pointed out the slider, I thought it kinda moved to fast. Or is it just me? Just seems kind of off-putting. Or I am just weird.

As you probably already know, there is a big gap in between the lower sections. Seems something should be there, or like something is missing.

Thank you for your reply. I'm not sure what you mean by "big gap in between the lower sections" would you be able to send screenshot about it?

Thank you so much.

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Ron Killian

12 years ago

Originally Posted by Peter Hupuczi

Thank you for your reply. I'm not sure what you mean by "big gap in between the lower sections" would you be able to send screenshot about it?

Thank you so much.

Right after "Beat Your Competitors" Text block, there is a white band, before the "Latest Tweets" section. Big empty space.

Not a big deal, just seems something missing. Or hate to see visitors miss something because it was further down the screen, they might miss it.

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Peter Hupuczi

12 years ago

Originally Posted by Ron Killian

Right after "Beat Your Competitors" Text block, there is a white band, before the "Latest Tweets" section. Big empty space.

Not a big deal, just seems something missing. Or hate to see visitors miss something because it was further down the screen, they might miss it.

Yes, I have got it

Thanks for directing me tot the right direction. I may put that space into a god use

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g r hasib

12 years ago

Sorry,impossible to find out your mistake.

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Chips Fletcher

12 years ago

I dont like the slider at all - better to be banners. If you write words like "adwertising" instead of "advertising" then you will not be classed as professional

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Peter Hupuczi

12 years ago

Originally Posted by Chips Fletcher

I dont like the slider at all - better to be banners. If you write words like "adwertising" instead of "advertising" then you will not be classed as professional

thank you, great thought

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themubeen

12 years ago

too much bouncing slideshow is difficult to read.

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Peter Hupuczi 12 years ago

Originally Posted by themubeen

too much bouncing slideshow is difficult to read.

great opinion, thank you
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