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Need to Know all My Mistakes

by Peter Hupuczi
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Hi

Please could you tell me what is your opinion about my website. I would like to hear some critics about it since at this moment I only know my opinion about it :p

It would be great if you can tell about

1. User Friendlyness
2. Design

3. What could make better the site

In return I'm trying to find something to give but at this moment I have nothing in mind but will find something and send it to you or make a thread for it

Thank you!

#mistakes
  • Profile picture of the author bhmseoservices
    What's your website?
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    • Profile picture of the author Peter Hupuczi
      Originally Posted by bhmseoservices View Post

      What's your website?
      Sily me.... I have left out the most important part of the post

      Sory about that, this could be because I'm diet from now ind my brain started it to
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  • Profile picture of the author Istvan Horvath
    The site displays an error message from one of your WP plugins... (see at the bottom).
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    Attention grabber WP Plugin gives php error!
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    • Profile picture of the author DJL
      Aside from the technical problems mentioned previously, your site has numerous grammatical and spelling errors. It would benefit from careful proofreading by a native English speaker.
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      • Profile picture of the author Peter Hupuczi
        Originally Posted by DJL View Post

        Aside from the technical problems mentioned previously, your site has numerous grammatical and spelling errors. It would benefit from careful proofreading by a native English speaker.
        Thank you for pointing that out.
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  • Profile picture of the author laurencewins
    Maybe it is just me but I personally don't like the slides. I like to be able to read something properly before it disappears.

    I concur with the comments about proofreading as well. That only makes the
    content look worse.
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    • Profile picture of the author Peter Hupuczi
      Originally Posted by laurencewins View Post

      Maybe it is just me but I personally don't like the slides. I like to be able to read something properly before it disappears.

      I concur with the comments about proofreading as well. That only makes the
      content look worse.
      Thanks you for your opinion. Proofreading is in progress now
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      • Profile picture of the author Anthony Fesalbon
        I agree. The slider you're using is not user friendly.

        I suggest you add portfolio and testimonials to make it more convincing.
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        • Profile picture of the author Peter Hupuczi
          Originally Posted by Anthony Fesalbon View Post

          I agree. The slider you're using is not user friendly.

          I suggest you add portfolio and testimonials to make it more convincing.
          Thank You for your opinion.
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        • Profile picture of the author connorbringas
          Originally Posted by Anthony Fesalbon View Post

          I agree. The slider you're using is not user friendly.

          I suggest you add portfolio and testimonials to make it more convincing.
          I agree, the load time of your site/slider is long as well.

          Looks like you dont have a meta description on your pages? And your title tags arent very SEO friendly.
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          • Profile picture of the author Peter Hupuczi
            Originally Posted by connorbringas View Post

            I agree, the load time of your site/slider is long as well.

            Looks like you dont have a meta description on your pages? And your title tags arent very SEO friendly.
            Thank you very much to point this out.
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  • Profile picture of the author Ron Killian
    Others have pointed out the slider, I thought it kinda moved to fast. Or is it just me? Just seems kind of off-putting. Or I am just weird.

    As you probably already know, there is a big gap in between the lower sections. Seems something should be there, or like something is missing.
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    • Profile picture of the author Peter Hupuczi
      Originally Posted by Ron Killian View Post

      Others have pointed out the slider, I thought it kinda moved to fast. Or is it just me? Just seems kind of off-putting. Or I am just weird.

      As you probably already know, there is a big gap in between the lower sections. Seems something should be there, or like something is missing.
      Thank you for your reply. I'm not sure what you mean by "big gap in between the lower sections" would you be able to send screenshot about it?

      Thank you so much.
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      • Profile picture of the author Ron Killian
        Originally Posted by Peter Hupuczi View Post

        Thank you for your reply. I'm not sure what you mean by "big gap in between the lower sections" would you be able to send screenshot about it?

        Thank you so much.
        Right after "Beat Your Competitors" Text block, there is a white band, before the "Latest Tweets" section. Big empty space.

        Not a big deal, just seems something missing. Or hate to see visitors miss something because it was further down the screen, they might miss it.
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        • Profile picture of the author Peter Hupuczi
          Originally Posted by Ron Killian View Post

          Right after "Beat Your Competitors" Text block, there is a white band, before the "Latest Tweets" section. Big empty space.

          Not a big deal, just seems something missing. Or hate to see visitors miss something because it was further down the screen, they might miss it.
          Yes, I have got it Thanks for directing me tot the right direction. I may put that space into a god use
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  • Profile picture of the author g r hasib
    Sorry,impossible to find out your mistake.
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    ;)

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  • Profile picture of the author Chips Fletcher
    I dont like the slider at all - better to be banners. If you write words like "adwertising" instead of "advertising" then you will not be classed as professional
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    • Profile picture of the author Peter Hupuczi
      Originally Posted by Chips Fletcher View Post

      I dont like the slider at all - better to be banners. If you write words like "adwertising" instead of "advertising" then you will not be classed as professional
      thank you, great thought
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  • Profile picture of the author themubeen
    too much bouncing slideshow is difficult to read.
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    • Profile picture of the author Peter Hupuczi
      Originally Posted by themubeen View Post

      too much bouncing slideshow is difficult to read.
      great opinion, thank you
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