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Kingfish85

12 years ago

Originally Posted by 7day

Hi there,

Could I have a few folks review my site.. How is the layout and sales funnel.. THanks

Wes

I have no idea since there's no link. :confused:

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TheContentAuthority

12 years ago

Wes,

If the site you would like us to review is the same one in your FB profile, I have a couple suggestions.

One is the image that you have of yourself on the right side of the screen. The image is ok but I’m assuming you want people to click the huge blue button to the left of the image. You should have yourself instead looking at the button instead of straight forward. People are naturally drawn to images and they will look at those first before any text or buttons. If the image is of a person, they will look wherever the picture of the person is looking. You may be able to increase the amount of people seeing and clicking on the button if you are looking at it.

Also, I’m not sure if you are doing any SEO but if you are targeting keywords for this particular page with your image, you should make those the most prominent thing. For instance if you place them in the header at the top of the page (the one that currently says get fit with passion).

If you aren’t that involved with web design I would recommend reading this book,

Don't Make Me Think: A Common Sense Approach to...
It’s a quick read and it has tons of useful tips on web design and usability.

Hope that helps,

Shawn

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IMDESTROYER

Banned 12 years ago

Originally Posted by TheContentAuthority

Wes,

If the site you would like us to review is the same one in your FB profile, I have a couple suggestions.

One is the image that you have of yourself on the right side of the screen. The image is ok but I’m assuming you want people to click the huge blue button to the left of the image. You should have yourself instead looking at the button instead of straight forward. People are naturally drawn to images and they will look at those first before any text or buttons. If the image is of a person, they will look wherever the picture of the person is looking. You may be able to increase the amount of people seeing and clicking on the button if you are looking at it.

Also, I’m not sure if you are doing any SEO but if you are targeting keywords for this particular page with your image, you should make those the most prominent thing. For instance if you place them in the header at the top of the page (the one that currently says get fit with passion).

If you aren’t that involved with web design I would recommend reading this book,

Don't Make Me Think: A Common Sense Approach to Web Usability, 2nd Edition: Steve Krug: 9780321344755: Amazon.com: Books

It’s a quick read and it has tons of useful tips on web design and usability.

Hope that helps,

Shawn

That is horrible advice. I suggest you re-read that book and many others.

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LanceS2k

12 years ago

Originally Posted by IMDESTROYER

That is horrible advice. I suggest you re-read that book and many others.

That guy seems to put that in every reply to a thread.

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Anthony Fesalbon

12 years ago

You have a very beautiful website Wesley. Nice color scheme and combination.

Some suggestions...
1. Add more social media buttons (twitter & pinterest) for more exposure.
2. Make the teaser video on top (above the fold) so users will be prompted
to watch it.
3. Make this website responsive so that it will be mobile and tablet friendly.
I'm looking at my iPhone and it's not mobile friendly.

Good job!

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wiredtolive

12 years ago

Originally Posted by Anthony Fesalbon

You have a very beautiful website Wesley. Nice color scheme and combination.

Some suggestions...
1. Add more social media buttons (twitter & pinterest) for more exposure.
2. Make the teaser video on top (above the fold) so users will be prompted
to watch it.
3. Make this website responsive so that it will be mobile and tablet friendly.
I'm looking at my iPhone and it's not mobile friendly.

Good job!

I wouldn't worry about twitter or pinterest, but I would add Linkedin. Lots of professionals use it and I know they would love what you offer!!

To me the site looks great!! Good job!!

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admin@subashseo.com

12 years ago

Without your website URL we can't able to say anything 7day.

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mikedex

12 years ago

Please mention your website URL or domain name.

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7day

12 years ago

I am sorry guys lol

Long night!! here is the site wesleyvirgin.com

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IMDESTROYER

Banned 12 years ago

You should be using an external style sheet for your CSS and the last part, right under "What's happening on 7DayFitness ?" looks really messy. You should re-organize it. Other than that the site looks incredible.

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kazim

12 years ago

You have done a very beautiful color combination.
Improve your menu bar. If you make the font size small it will look more beautiful.

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admin@subashseo.com

12 years ago

There is need to change your menu bar color because texts not looking clear. There is no link in Facebook button.

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anexplore

12 years ago

Change the color of Menu Bar, add a register button like login button, add a little big Icon for social network & make it like that....
Contact : Facebook : YouTube: Register : Login
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nawshale

12 years ago

Hi there! I think your site's layout is okay. . however by the way I noticed there are quite many white spaces especially on the bottom part.

also, 24Hr may consider changing to 24 Hour

and "longterm" should be two separate words.. typo error perhaps.

Please also do review the links cos some are not working properly

hope this helps. Goodluck!

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rodtyler 12 years ago

I think most of the commentators here are being way too analytical. For me, the site took a little too long to load, but I don't know if that is because of the site or a slow connection.

I also was a little confused at first whether this was an online membership or offline, as in a gym.

Other than that, I thought the site looked great. If I wasn't already an awesome physical specimen, I might be tempted to join myself.
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Scott Botkins

12 years ago

I'm not a big fan of the site colors. You have too much going on around your call to action button. I would eliminate the two buttons above it and just have those be links or place them some where else.

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