you are on the right road, just keep adding stuff to it like contact, copyrights pages and change background color to a golf course picture or something like that but not bad for your first one.....

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You have a great site but lack of content. Adding more articles would be great for search engine exposure.

You may want to cloak your affiliate links, and optimize your title and site description. But great job for a first site!

I would delete the Top Menu since you just have the "Home" option.

Your header part should be modified. It looking blankly. Need to add more menus.

Hello,

You should more concentrate on your quality content. That has to be related to your side not Other categories.

Thanks

Yep you need more usability - more pages to navigate and ofc more usefull content to increase time on site

I agree with the others...you need to add more content.

Then work on your site navigation using clear site structure.

...and, definitely hide those affiliate links.

man it looks really awesome. wish my website looked that good haha.

i just bought your product too joke! haha

I agree. More content.. content is king..

Make few categories and put adsense ad b/w the article so that you can get reasonable revenue.

The site is a great one. You can definitely keep on adding more interesting material to attract people to your site. If I were in your place, I would add 2 pictures of popular golfers each on either side of the material as a background picture. That will make the site more attractive.

After the title "GOLF SWING TIPS & GOLF TRAINING AIDS FROM THE SIMPLE GOLF SWING SYSTEM:" add a picture of a trainer training an enthusiastic golfer. That will make people understand what you are about to tell them through your content.

You may also add a page to your site of a video where would be golfers are being trained from experts. Sometimes people like to watch videos instead of going through a content.

You may also add a page where you can mention interesting tips from eminent golfers from across the globe. These tips can help you attract people to your site very easily.

Hope my suggestions will help you.

I like your menu bar and banner.
I think if you use green background it will be perfect.
Over all great.

Great site, i am going down the same route i.e. affiliate marketing but diffeent niche, how to you make the affilaite links into the " Click here to lower your golf score"?? that has been my stumbling block as simple Sentence of the products made into a hyperlink seems the obvious choice to me but was told it as soo basic?

well... you have a golf website with a futuristic grunge/space theme.. doesn't work for me.

I would organize things a bit better. Make the banner dimensions smaller,
fix up the top navigation, adjust the background. other then that it's not
that bad but still needs improvement.