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Critique and Review My Website!

by JeremiahSay
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Hi Warriors,

Need some serious critique and review on my website, it's still very new, haven't done any serious marketing on it yet.

Before I do any heavy promotion, I would love to hear your feedback first.

Is there anything I can do to improve visitor's flow?

- Should I change the thumbnail of the video?

- Should I change the main video (cartoon) and record myself speaking instead (will that increase credibility)?

- Do you understand what this website is all about?

Your feedback will be greatly appreciated. Looking forward to your critique and review.

Check the website in the my signature file below or simply click here.
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  • Profile picture of the author Designs1
    Looking very professional!

    Only thing i would change is the font of Watch This Video Now, other than that, looking good
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  • Profile picture of the author JeremiahSay
    Any more critique guys? Is the website over-whelming? Should I break it down to step by step or perhaps drive traffic to a landing page first (funnel)?

    Any feedback will be greatly appreciated. Thank you.
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  • Profile picture of the author Nauman K
    Hey Buddy,
    Site colour scheme look great
    you don't need to change the video cartoonic is fine.
    I have two suggestion.
    1: there is a space between the video and the logo if you decrease it so that video comes up and a person view it without scrolling, also if the first video start playing automitacllly then it will be great as your website main part is video, not to many graphical headline/sub headline.
    secondly I would suggest to improve the logo as a logo designer I think its very basic and color scheme is also not matching the website design.
    you can try my initial free logo concept offer for test(not try market myself here)...

    Other then site look great and wish you best of luck buddy.
    Thanks
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    • Profile picture of the author JeremiahSay
      Originally Posted by Nauman K View Post

      Hey Buddy,
      Site colour scheme look great
      you don't need to change the video cartoonic is fine.
      I have two suggestion.
      1: there is a space between the video and the logo if you decrease it so that video comes up and a person view it without scrolling, also if the first video start playing automitacllly then it will be great as your website main part is video, not to many graphical headline/sub headline.
      secondly I would suggest to improve the logo as a logo designer I think its very basic and color scheme is also not matching the website design.
      you can try my initial free logo concept offer for test(not try market myself here)...

      Other then site look great and wish you best of luck buddy.
      Thanks
      Nauman K
      Hi Nauman,

      I've checked out your logo design service (in your signature ad). Sure I would love to find out more. Since you're a designer yourself, do you have any idea on the design should look like on my website? Do you have any suggestions?

      Please PM with some samples you have in mind. Thank you Nauman. Really appreciate your time and effort to review my website.

      With regards,
      Jeremiah
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  • Profile picture of the author juztin
    Clean and very professional.
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  • Profile picture of the author Allintune
    Looks good. Lots of call to action going on. Have you had a lot of sign-ups so far?
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  • Profile picture of the author thomasjs02
    It looks very nice and professional. I would imagine that this site in converting decently for you.
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  • Profile picture of the author Murphysmurfy
    I would only change your logo.
    It's hard to read and it has a different background color from the background of the site.
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  • Profile picture of the author WebdevelopmentGroup
    - Should I change the thumbnail of the video?

    Nope, keep it the way it is.

    - Should I change the main video (cartoon) and record myself speaking instead (will that increase credibility)?

    Keep this the same also. Users believe the situation when they see a human on camera

    - Do you understand what this website is all about?

    Yea some what

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  • Profile picture of the author JSutton
    Originally Posted by JeremiahSay View Post

    Hi Warriors,

    Need some serious critique and review on my website, it's still very new, haven't done any serious marketing on it yet.

    Before I do any heavy promotion, I would love to hear your feedback first.

    Is there anything I can do to improve visitor's flow?

    - Should I change the thumbnail of the video?

    - Should I change the main video (cartoon) and record myself speaking instead (will that increase credibility)?

    - Do you understand what this website is all about?

    Your feedback will be greatly appreciated. Looking forward to your critique and review.

    Check the website in the my signature file below or simply click here.
    Hey, your site looks fantastic! Might I just ask how/where you got the cartoon videos designed? They are very effective!
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  • Profile picture of the author Paxton21
    The site looks really good, it is a much nicer landing and selling page than most. The video integration really differentiates it from competing sites.
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  • Profile picture of the author Husacul
    The logo design is a bit painful to the eyes.
    Maybe the thumbnail of the video is a bit too large? Later on you should check what is the most used resolution of you users and tweak it accordingly.

    Overall I think you did a good job!

    Cheers!
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  • Profile picture of the author icon24
    Hi Jeremiah,

    I really like the logo, very catchy. I think the site is very crowed. There is a lot of information on the home page and it loaded slow for me.

    Maybe tuning it down a little will help conversion as well.

    Thanks Joe
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  • Profile picture of the author blogfreakz
    It's looks great dude!!! good work! clean design and very professional
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