please review my site

Hello CrazyAds...

I took a look at your site and I like the look of it...but I think that the text is stuffed with your keyword and is not going to be very appealing to your visitor.

It is one thing to rank in the search engines for your keyword...then it is also very important to have the content on the page that will convert once a visitor arrives.

Once the text is rewritten for your visitor...I would also format it to include some padding on the edges and a lot more white space. It is hard to read a large block of text...

Hope this helps...

I took a look using my iPad and the general layout looks good but I have a few pointers. The main text needs to have some padding all around so that the text isn't crammed to the edges of the box. The nav area should probably come down a bit so that the bottom of the text aligns with the bottom of the logo? The drop down menu should be vertically centered with the input box. And the drop down should have an initial value like "Please Select". You should include some photos especially of smiling people. People love and respond to smiles! And lastly you should have a very specific call-to-action. What is it that you want the visitor to do? Scream it at them! "Search Now!", "Buy Now!"

Other than that I like the cleanness of it!

P.S. it's "an LA roofer" not "a LA roofer". It's a common mistake but the "n" is there so that when speaking, you don't have to pronounce two separate vowel sounds consecutively - in this case "a" and "ellay".

Thank you very much, I will re-write the text and make those changes. I appreciate the feed back

One more thing, is it too repetitive to have roofer after every city. I was doing it to have search friendly url's but it looks to busy there to me.

Nice site ... I would replace the metallic background with something that reflects the roofing business.

Or ... solid white in the body of the page with image accents on the sides of the page. The graphic presently is drawing my eye to it over the text on the page.

Hi CrazyAds,

Here are some of the ideas that I that I mentioned above. I tinkered around with the background in Photoshop for you.

http://kinderroom.com/wp-content/upl...erWebsite1.jpg
http://kinderroom.com/wp-content/upl...erWebsite2.jpg


You also may want to adjust the spacing between the text and the border. The text is a bit to close to the border.

Hope this helps.

i like it. nice and clean design. best of luck with it!

The site is neat and clean. It is good just needs a few tweaking on the
background. over all it is good.