Please review

by tonyla

Posted: 11 years ago 22 replies

WEB DESIGN

Please review this site.
Not looking for compliments looking for feedback
on
the sites pupose ?
Is it easy to find stuff"
Is it worth growing

I have more stuff to add so I would like feedback before I add it.

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thank you in advance
Anthony Larrain
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tonyla 11 years ago

Anyone have any ideas on this one
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TheContentAuthority 11 years ago

Tonyla,

I have a few suggestions for you.

Your home page has way too much content on it. This isn’t bad from an SEO standpoint but from a design and usability standpoint. No one will read all of that and it diminishes the professionalism of the website.

Your main navigation is too crowded. Try consolidating some of the menu items into sub menus so that there are enough menu items to go the width of your wrapper but not start a new line.

The image of the crown and computer windows are too distracting from the content on the page. I’m guessing you want visitors to know what it is you do and buy your services. Having images that drown out that content works against you. You may also want to consider changing the italic font in your tag line. Its very hard to read.

Your color scheme is also kind of all over the place. Your main navigation background is gold, the body background is a peach color and then you have a lot of blue imagery. It just clashes.

You may be able to find some more tips here,

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Hope that helps you,

Shawn
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rosiebrown0 11 years ago

Hi tonlya,
Your designs no doubt is good..but yes there is lot of content and i think you should look over to the font style...otherwise good work.
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tonyla 11 years ago

Thank you folks,
very helpfull, i removed the top navigation and I'll re do logo so it is not distracting.
cheers,
tonyla
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Sue McDonald 11 years ago

Hi Tonyla
I have to agree to much on the home page and I was not impressed with the light green color. I think a darker color would be better.
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- tonyla 11 years ago
  
  I agree, thanks for the input.
  I dunno how it turned that way(it always happens when i use a wysiwyg instead of the editor)
  
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weboasis 11 years ago

It doesn't look a modern (2013) website.

I would start by changing the background.
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Heart Cardio

11 years ago

I am not really a fan of the top. I do not like the way it states I king of content dot com. I would change this.

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Adorer 11 years ago

I just took a quick look.

1. The name of the website will be best without stating 'dot com'. If your are trying to help your visitors remember that it is dot com versus any other extension it is unnecessary. It simply does not look right.

2. 'Currently'is spelled with two 'r' s.

3. The link bar is not centered leaving e-courses on a second line to the right margin. I think that you can easily get a nice modern looking drop down bar. Get rid of that, it is not even clear if they are links or just a list.

4. 'You cart is empty' where it is placed is kind of annoying and seems pushy. My cart may very well be empty and remain empty. I don't need it stated with an exclamation mark - sell me the product and I will take care of the cart. That's what you want to focus on - selling the products.

5. I don't like it that there is a list of articles on the front page. They can be provided with a link from the front page.

Hope this helps.
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- tonyla 11 years ago
  
  Absolutely
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- tonyla 11 years ago
  
  Thanks everyone.
  Gotta call it on logo unless I get someone to do it, not sure right now if that is an expense worth taking on)
  It is better then before.
  Corrected miss spelled words.
  Took out the listing of the directory contents from homepage..
  
  One suggestion that I want to implement is the shopping cart location.
  
  Should I have a page called check out and if
  I am using estore and just learning it anyone know of a short code that can be placed in the page contents cause right now i just have a widget.
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- tonyla 11 years ago
  
  To make it simple i canged background, if it work's i will leave it cause that could turn into hours of playin g.
  If not, all black or all white ?
  
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tonyla

11 years ago

Is it the .com cause i plan on taking it out or is it the I King of content
does it make me sound arrogant ?

How dare you tell the king what to do

I hope it is the dot com, be honest

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Adorer

11 years ago

Originally Posted by tonyla

Is it the .com cause i plan on taking it out or is it the I King of content
does it make me sound arrogant ?

How dare you tell the king what to do

I hope it is the dot com, be honest

No, it doesn't make you sound arrogant.

It's actually nice and it sells.

It's a nice name for a content website. What I and others have noted is adding the 'dot com' after the name of the website. It just doesn't look good at all.

Hope this helps.

Good luck and best wishes with your site.

Thanks
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tonyla 11 years ago

Very Helpfull, I am responding so folks know that I actually am implementing there suggestions. I plan on removing .com , as always I forget to save the work space.
I am glad many commented on the .com I have been doing that on a few of my sites for some reason I have it stuck in my head that the main heading should match the domain name .
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mrfriend 11 years ago

Your site looks good, i liked it.
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- tonyla 11 years ago
  
  Thank you for posting that.
  I could possibly have a different store of each of my categories but
  I am sure they are all related.
  I probably could elimate the wordpress section that would be a stand alone site.
  
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fedroza 11 years ago

Your site very simple but like look.
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vjboc 11 years ago

Tonyla, There is alot of content. Which is odd, usually everyone says not enough content. You could add a couple more images between the content to dress it up. Also have an image above the fold. The pink background is not bad If you could make the site a little wider, that would make less pink. Also I agree with the dot com, you dont need that.
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lanotdesign 11 years ago

Hey Tonyla
the only problem I have is the pink back ground. I don't like it at all. add some texture, or change the color altogether.
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Zakhar 11 years ago

couldn't help but notice the whole "I King of content dot com" nobody will take you seriously why not keep it simple and make it "IKingOfContent.com"

Use another theme, the pink background is blinding. Good luck
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