by pvijeh
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Hello All,

I am pretty new to HTML / CSS / Web design. With that in mind, I was hoping that some of you might critique my site.

NYC Clubs and lounges - Your Guide to Exclusive New York Nightlife

I look forward to hearing your comments.

thanks,

Peter
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  • Profile picture of the author pvijeh
    hmm, no one wants to give me some insight? anything at all is appreciated.
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  • Profile picture of the author Benjamin Cip
    pvijeh, your website is lacking something.

    To be honest with you, I don't really like the header and the Yeti's logo either, but that's just my opinion.

    However I like the font and social media icons you use.

    Concerning the graphic chart, I was hoping to see something more appealing.
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    • Profile picture of the author pvijeh
      Originally Posted by Benjamin Cip View Post

      pvijeh, your website is lacking something.

      To be honest with you, I don't really like the header and the Yeti's logo either, but that's just my opinion.

      However I like the font and social media icons you use.

      Concerning the graphic chart, I was hoping to see something more appealing.
      Thanks!

      I agree, I think that these areas could be improved - do you have any suggestions?


      Peter
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      • Profile picture of the author Benjamin Cip
        Originally Posted by pvijeh View Post

        Thanks!

        I agree, I think that these areas could be improved - do you have any suggestions?


        Peter
        Yes I do have some suggestions on how you could improve your header.

        You could invest into a Logo design for instance. I've found a lot of Yeti mascot design on google images search engine. Just type "Yeti Logo" and you'll find some nice mascots for your site.

        You should also invest in a font for the logo that is related to your blog theme, it must be different from other texts fonts.

        Logo is very important, it's your brand, and people will recognize you thanks to your logo, if you have a great yeti's mascot design, you could print it on t-shirt etc...

        I would put the boxes (Feel like being friendly, Exclusive club and Exclusive club by crowd type) before the video box, just after the header.

        Hope it helps...
        Benjamin Cip
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        • Profile picture of the author pvijeh
          Originally Posted by Benjamin Cip View Post

          Yes I do have some suggestions on how you could improve your header.

          You could invest into a Logo design for instance. I've found a lot of Yeti mascot design on google images search engine. Just type "Yeti Logo" and you'll find some nice mascots for your site.

          You should also invest in a font for the logo that is related to your blog theme, it must be different from other texts fonts.

          Logo is very important, it's your brand, and people will recognize you thanks to your logo, if you have a great yeti's mascot design, you could print it on t-shirt etc...

          I would put the boxes (Feel like being friendly, Exclusive club and Exclusive club by crowd type) before the video box, just after the header.

          Hope it helps...
          Benjamin Cip
          thanks - this was helpful
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  • Profile picture of the author ziubzia
    It looks a little cut and paste. Try rounding the edges to give it a softer look maybe and introduce a colour scheme rather than the blackwhite background?
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  • Profile picture of the author jay walters
    The site just needs little more improvement on the graphics and is there any other fonts/typography you could use for your menu and header?

    anyway for the overall layout its neat.
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  • Profile picture of the author pvijeh
    thanks everyone!
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    • Profile picture of the author truvahorse
      Your site looks amazing and awesome. It is clean and great
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  • Profile picture of the author bolista
    Looks ok to me. good luck with it
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