Critique My Site

pvijeh

12 years ago

hmm, no one wants to give me some insight? anything at all is appreciated.

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The Offline Oracle 12 years ago

Originally Posted by pvijeh

hmm, no one wants to give me some insight? anything at all is appreciated.

Looks good but perhaps they one critique would that it's a bit square or right-angle-ish. As it's an entertainment based site, maybe have a look at some WordPress band themes or similar.

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- pvijeh 12 years ago
  
  hmm, yes. I think you are right about that. Thanks for the tip, very helpful
  
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Benjamin Cip

12 years ago

pvijeh, your website is lacking something.

To be honest with you, I don't really like the header and the Yeti's logo either, but that's just my opinion.

However I like the font and social media icons you use.

Concerning the graphic chart, I was hoping to see something more appealing.

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pvijeh

12 years ago

Originally Posted by Benjamin Cip

pvijeh, your website is lacking something.

To be honest with you, I don't really like the header and the Yeti's logo either, but that's just my opinion.

However I like the font and social media icons you use.

Concerning the graphic chart, I was hoping to see something more appealing.

Thanks!

I agree, I think that these areas could be improved - do you have any suggestions?

Peter

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Benjamin Cip

12 years ago

Originally Posted by pvijeh

Thanks!

I agree, I think that these areas could be improved - do you have any suggestions?

Peter

Yes I do have some suggestions on how you could improve your header.

You could invest into a Logo design for instance. I've found a lot of Yeti mascot design on google images search engine. Just type "Yeti Logo" and you'll find some nice mascots for your site.

You should also invest in a font for the logo that is related to your blog theme, it must be different from other texts fonts.

Logo is very important, it's your brand, and people will recognize you thanks to your logo, if you have a great yeti's mascot design, you could print it on t-shirt etc...

I would put the boxes (Feel like being friendly, Exclusive club and Exclusive club by crowd type) before the video box, just after the header.

Hope it helps...
Benjamin Cip

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pvijeh

12 years ago

Originally Posted by Benjamin Cip

Yes I do have some suggestions on how you could improve your header.

You could invest into a Logo design for instance. I've found a lot of Yeti mascot design on google images search engine. Just type "Yeti Logo" and you'll find some nice mascots for your site.

You should also invest in a font for the logo that is related to your blog theme, it must be different from other texts fonts.

Logo is very important, it's your brand, and people will recognize you thanks to your logo, if you have a great yeti's mascot design, you could print it on t-shirt etc...

I would put the boxes (Feel like being friendly, Exclusive club and Exclusive club by crowd type) before the video box, just after the header.

Hope it helps...
Benjamin Cip

thanks - this was helpful

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ziubzia

12 years ago

It looks a little cut and paste. Try rounding the edges to give it a softer look maybe and introduce a colour scheme rather than the blackwhite background?

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jay walters

12 years ago

The site just needs little more improvement on the graphics and is there any other fonts/typography you could use for your menu and header?

anyway for the overall layout its neat.