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Need Your Advice

by OgleDirect
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  • WEB DESIGN
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I've been building a site www (dot) createwhiteboardvideos (dot) com and I want your opinion on it. Please note I did not put in the link as I understand some people would think I am trying to get free traffic out of this by Google. I'm not trying to get free traffic from the Warrior Forum or Google.

Also, when you go to the site, you will NOT see a "Buy Now" button(/s) anywhere. Again I want your feedback, I am not trying to sell anything. When I do feel the site is ready, I will buy a ad on the Warrior Forum.

Please note this is my first rough draft and I don't expect people to think much of it, but I would appreciate your recommendations. When you go to the site, you will see a video that auto-plays. When my site is ready, I will not use that video, I just needed to make a video real fast to see how my layout works.
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  • Profile picture of the author RobinInTexas
    I think you should add some bullet points to the sales page, like you have in the video.

    Without the video, it's more like a boring sales letter than a website.
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    ...Even if you're on the right track, you'll get run over if you just set there.
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  • Profile picture of the author angshuy2k
    Really a nice start and looking good on a white back ground, just few thoughts:

    a) You can use like a watermark cartoons or white board animation as a background. ( Just a thought )

    b) Couple of sample work and demo videos for customers

    c) Some reviews if you have already started marketing.

    Regards,
    Swrajit
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  • Profile picture of the author Marketer Matt
    I'd consider changing the "Contact Us" to "Get Pricing" that shifts either opens a pricing page or scrolls down the page to the pricing. There should be a "Buy Now" button as well. If people can't pay right on the site, explain what you want them to do on the Contact Us form. If I'm trying to buy, and there's no obvious clear call, people will get frustrated and leave.
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