Need review on my landing page

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Hi,

I needs reviews on my landing page; RuneScape - Home

Thanks in advance!!
#landing #page #review
  • Profile picture of the author Faitas
    Hey there,

    I just reviewed your landing page and I like it. One plus is that you have used Foundation framework to code the web design and it guarantees your web design is shown perfect on almost all major web browsers.

    But, in my opinion, you should put the contact form in the center of the page.

    That's all, you did a great job!
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  • Profile picture of the author Marketer Matt
    Pretty nice page. Depending on your strategy, you might consider taking the ad off of the page. Generally landing pages are focused on getting the user to take one action. It seems that in this case you're trying to get sign ups. The advertisement doesn't help with that.
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  • Profile picture of the author kstep
    Hey man, the page itself looks quite good.

    One thing that doesn't look well is the ad. Please take it off - it doesn't resonate with the landing page at all.

    Alternatively, you could try to do A and B testing. Create two very similar landing pages but maybe with different button colors, background colors, different call to action text and see how it works then.

    I can give you more advises on this - it really works, because you can see the actual results what works and what doesn't.

    Cheers,

    Karl
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  • Profile picture of the author karaboga
    I see many mistakes like lots of distractions and problems with value proposition. I'd suggest you to check this: http://unbounce.com/landing-page-exa...with-unbounce/
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  • Profile picture of the author Intellectus
    Thanks for all the feedback guys, I really appreciate it!
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  • Profile picture of the author Istvan Horvath
    Any website that has music without my - i.e. the visitor's permission - is a bad website.

    Furthermore, as it was noted by others, too many irrelevant information and distraction... so I forgot to opt in - lacks the focus.
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  • Profile picture of the author Intellectus
    I thought it would be good to track the people coming onto your website with the Youtube video playing off. Also, the ad is to make some money of the website (Hopefully).
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    • Profile picture of the author Istvan Horvath
      Originally Posted by Intellectus View Post

      I thought it would be good to track the people coming onto your website with the Youtube video playing off. Also, the ad is to make some money of the website (Hopefully).
      It doesn't really matter what you thought, sorry.

      There are scripts for tracking that don't make freaking loud noise at 2:00am if I happen to arrive to your site at that time - why to wake up the whole house...? :rolleyes:

      You don't listen what everybody is trying to teach you: on an optin page (squeeze page) you do NOT put any ads. Period. The optin page serves only one single goal - to entice people to subscribe to your list. In the moment you offer another option (like clicking on the ad or all kind of irrelevant links) they will avoid to sign up. You may think you gained a few cents if they clicked an ad instead of signing up to your mailing list... but then you, obviously, didn't think (didn't hear?) about the lifetime value of a subscriber. If down the road you would be able to sell 13 products with an average price of $19 to the same loyal subscriber... that's $247. A nice sum you just gave up to earn a couple of cents.
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