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How's my landing page?

by dbong
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Here's my landing page for a product I plan on launching soon. Ignoring the launch counter at the top (currently at 0), how do you guys think it looks/ any areas for improvement?

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Thanks!
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  • Profile picture of the author miked
    Hmmm.... too much...

    First of all... Great job! You actually have a landing page/squeeze page and a buy now button on a website, which is more than most IM'ers ever do. Awesome!

    The problem is that your landing page is asking too much... the top part above the fold is a GREAT squeeze page with a great video... although the headline isn't benefit laden, and the bottom part then tries to sell the product how to do this, how to copy your example.

    My thoughts....

    Now what I am going to recommend you of course have to test and split test and see what really works... but recommend that everything above the fold you keep as a landing page to squeeeeeze the contact information from visitors, then after they optin, show them your sales page...

    And if they don't buy you know have their email, so follow up with great information on how they can copy and follow your example... blow them away with great content, and every 2nd or 3rd day follow up with a pitch.

    Your picture is kind of geeky... put it above the fold with the squeeze page... if people see that they think "gezz that guy is making $500 bucks an hour? Must be simple... if he can then I can..."

    Use what you have...

    And don't just say $125 for 15 minutes... say you can make $500/hour... which is true if you are spending 15 minutes on a website and selling for $125.

    Also, the headline isn't benefit laden enough with detail... how about "Get My Exact Website Building Blueprint That Can Make You $500 An Hour"... or something like that...
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    • Profile picture of the author AgungKoes
      wow that is pretty interesting comments from miked, it can be input for beginners who want to sell products on warrior, whether the landing page like by miked could sell in warrior forums?, please input again
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    • Profile picture of the author dbong
      Originally Posted by miked View Post

      Hmmm.... too much...

      First of all... Great job! You actually have a landing page/squeeze page and a buy now button on a website, which is more than most IM'ers ever do. Awesome!

      The problem is that your landing page is asking too much... the top part above the fold is a GREAT squeeze page with a great video... although the headline isn't benefit laden, and the bottom part then tries to sell the product how to do this, how to copy your example.

      My thoughts....

      Now what I am going to recommend you of course have to test and split test and see what really works... but recommend that everything above the fold you keep as a landing page to squeeeeeze the contact information from visitors, then after they optin, show them your sales page...

      And if they don't buy you know have their email, so follow up with great information on how they can copy and follow your example... blow them away with great content, and every 2nd or 3rd day follow up with a pitch.

      Your picture is kind of geeky... put it above the fold with the squeeze page... if people see that they think "gezz that guy is making $500 bucks an hour? Must be simple... if he can then I can..."

      Use what you have...

      And don't just say $125 for 15 minutes... say you can make $500/hour... which is true if you are spending 15 minutes on a website and selling for $125.

      Also, the headline isn't benefit laden enough with detail... how about "Get My Exact Website Building Blueprint That Can Make You $500 An Hour"... or something like that...
      Thanks Mike! I really appreciate the insight. It's funny, I was just talking to a buddy of mine about doing something similar to what you described and split testing it. Looks like I have to now!

      Thanks again!
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  • Profile picture of the author BlackCow
    That's a nice landing page you have right there.Although i would suggest doing something to the head section so that it looks a bit more eye catching.
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  • Profile picture of the author Limonpervez
    Its pretty.Which email client you use for signup option (mailchimp/aweber) ?
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    • Profile picture of the author dbong
      Originally Posted by Limonpervez View Post

      Its pretty.Which email client you use for signup option (mailchimp/aweber) ?
      I am using GetResponse
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      • Profile picture of the author sortby
        Very nice I love it...also if if a little bit overcrowd of info!
        Best luck for your project!
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  • Profile picture of the author Bemmax50
    I absolutely agree with "Sortby", the page is over crowded, and the auto start video, is a total destruction when landing on the page. Mute it and let the visitor decide if they want to play it.
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